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I'm going to do you a favor.
Review by nekros22
Stop. Take a deep breath. Calm down.
Ready? Ok:
This is not a game that I would pay money for.
This is not a game a company would pay money for.
You are moving way too fast with something that I don't think you're being entirely truthful with.
The story is bad. The writing is bad. The player graphics are sub-par and instantly recognizable as Face Maker portraits. The music is familiar and drags on at times.
In short, I think you are drastically overestimating this game's marketability and quality.
Work on it. Start from scratch. Flesh out the story a little more, read a few novels, learn how to use dialogue and exposition effectively.
Redo it. Learn how to use the tools RPG Maker gives you. Don't rush it.
I hope this helps.
Reviewer's Score: 1 / 10, Posted Fri, 25 Feb 2011 20:36:28 -0500
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