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Very, Very Poor
Review by nekros22
I can tell you want to get this game made. I can tell you want this to be fun. I can also tell that you didn't spend ANY significant amount of time on it. Grammar was terrible as was spelling, your introduction of the conflict as well as Gentz's allies is flimsy at best and the entire thing is a lackluster affair. The only saving grace about this game is that it at least has some nice class change scripts and ATB scripts. Go back for a while, work on the story.
Detailed Issues:
-"Whereabouts" is one word.
- Proper nouns, such as important places, names, or things, are always capitalized.
-Who is Marin and why is he your friend?
-Why does the teacher just believe the book report your heroes did?
-Why is it so important that the Stone be found?
-Why are the children in the classroom not found anywhere else in the village?
Give it some TLC and post it back up. This game has potential.
Reviewer's Score: 1 / 10, Posted Tue, 10 Nov 2009 21:57:37 -0500
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