Twilight Darkness: Dark Reign

Comments: (18) twilight1300 (Wed, 24 Sep 2008 15:43:32 -0700) this is coming from a guy who cannot even put, thank god, you or because, doesn't anyone read the comments before they put them in, I GET THE POINT! i cannot help my grammer or my spelling you can't blame me if i have learning difficulties, cos it is psychological, i think it is dicriminating how you can pick on someone for things like that Tobi (Sun, 21 Sep 2008 22:30:33 -0700) Thank good yyou gota dictionary with you becuase you need more then that to help you. twilight1300 (Wed, 03 Sep 2008 02:06:11 -0700) *You! *I've 2 errors! I talk how i want i don't critisize you! It's my game i should be focusing on! twilight1300 (Wed, 03 Sep 2008 01:58:51 -0700) Your know even the people with the best grammer, have their own ways of saying things if you dont like the way i talk then tough! Your the only one with bad remarks iv seen! and as a a beginner you doing my head in! and im sure i am not the only one! I'VE had enough! if you hate my game so much you only need to comment once on it! Im sorry if what i say annoys anyone! but give a newbie A break! Basiliskeye (Tue, 02 Sep 2008 22:13:19 -0700) You can start with the word I've. twilight1300 (Tue, 02 Sep 2008 07:11:38 -0700) cheers for that Automaticher0, this was supposed to be rough version of the game im actually going to be making! the 2nd version should be alot better once finished! and probably bigger! and the grammer well thats changed and the spelling if any iv found an online dictionary to help me Automaticher0 (Tue, 02 Sep 2008 00:05:34 -0700) Don't take them so critical. I really wish my first game I EVER made looked this good. Keep plugging away and keep re-inventing yourself. Do you really think companies like Insomniac and Bungee made their first games amazing? Lastly, you can take this as a side project to improve your grammar.... Something no good project/employee/resume/writer should go without. twilight1300 (Mon, 01 Sep 2008 05:27:16 -0700) to answer the last question, If you read all the comments everything has been mentioned at least once already and theres going to be a better version in a month or 2 im working on it now, but thanks otherwise behotts (Sun, 31 Aug 2008 19:45:16 -0700) Um, there are quite a few spelling errors, which I hope you get fixed and whats with all those annoying !'s? Sorry, but it just gets quite annoying, lol... Otherwise, great! twilight1300 (Sat, 30 Aug 2008 06:03:47 -0700) thanks should be! Iv created a mapping system, and mini games like fishing Kinda Zelda based mini games lol and got some helpers re creating the story line, and the interaction! should be more interactive and enjoyable at the same time dark and mysterious Spyon666 (Fri, 29 Aug 2008 19:21:01 -0700) Hope It will be fun twilight1300 (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 17:41:20 -0700) okay thank you for that feed back FlyingMan, Its going to take me some time due to the ammount of maps in the game and triggers and switches and stuff, but i give it a month or so and il have a better running version of this game, iv already jotted down pointers and stuff to make the game more interesting!, im gonna completely strip the game down to its core! and re master it TheFlyingMan (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 17:28:55 -0700) Hey, there are things you can do to improve this! You just need some help. Easy fixes include making people not disappear after you're done with them, make all the transfer events a Player Touch instead of Action Buttons and simply making it more clear on what you have to do. And the whole grammar thing, you just need a play tester (preferably someone who's better at grammar). Get some friends to play it beforehand, and get their opinion. And by the way, one "!" is usually enough... >_> Don't be afraid to use some regular periods. It can still be exciting! Good luck! Antifarea (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 16:13:44 -0700) twilight, convert those .psd files into either .jpg or .gif or .png... so others can see the screenshots. twilight1300 (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 15:59:53 -0700) I doubt il make another game cos im rubbish with grammer! gotta be careful how you say things to people because it may hurt them twilight1300 (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 15:51:50 -0700) Im going to be honest with you guys! its my first time and i did shit in english literacy! My keyboard and mouse mess up all the time thanks for the comments but this game I didnt expect to do amazingly! TheFlyingMan (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 15:33:46 -0700) I didn't play it until the end so I can't make a full review, but this game so far is very playable. The spelling's fine (you can understand most of what's going on), just the grammar is terrible (there are hundreds of unnecessary exclamation points). You don't even get to do your first battle until you get to the third town. And what's up with all the "you can't go there just because you can't?" This game just needs a lot more explanations...and needs to stop ignoring grammar rules. At least the maps are pretty good, though. Everything seemed to fit most of the time. The music fits pretty nice as well. It's just the little things that take you out of it. There's actually a part... When the king's daughter gets kidnapped, you go and talk to the king about it, and right after that, if you go back into the daughters room, and she's still there! False alarm kingy! And even after all the people who've randomly disappeared... So like I said before, it's still very playable...maybe not enjoyable, and sometimes mildly hilarious (though not on purpose), but still very playable! Basiliskeye (Thu, 28 Aug 2008 14:43:55 -0700) I am sorry to say this because it looks like you put a lot of time into this, but this game is just unplayable in this state. The writing is so full of poor spelling and grammar that even the main characters name is in lower case, and the story makes no sense. (what was with the horse?) You spend 10 minutes running around a little town trying to find 6 hidden bags of gold to buy a sword so you can get out of a town full of people that vanish after you talk to them. Only to end up in a toxic green looking forest with NPC wolves that automatically kill you if you touch them. so yeah, needs a lot more work.