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Kaleb Daub
Here I will be posting all my latest edits I believe are worth posting. and ask for feedback for them please I am trying my best to get better and better. If you think you can do better please do so and take me step by step if you are willing to. I am aiming to be good enough to join art staff on this site so mainly tell me what you think and give me ideas please. I will post Updated versions when ready.

Sora's son T.K. From my fan Game Kingdom Hearts Unwritten.

Original Version


Link to original sprite sheet credits on it.
http://www.spriters-resource.com/community...ad.php?tid=2952

T.K. Based on these images made by Relaxed Chillen.
Ideas


Cid from Final Fantasy 7's son Mid Also From My fan game Kingdom Hearts Unwriiten

Original By Holder


Mid Based on these images. Face by Sketcy-Sketch and Sprite by OBubblesO
I added in the cig for his face set.
ideas
X-M-O
You seem to be coming along quite nicely with these character sheets and animated battlers. ^^

Especially good work on this one:

It matches the character well, and even has the cigarette in place, lol. I don't think I've seen that before.
Kaleb Daub
Thanks it took me about 30 minutes I think just to do that Mids first animated sprite Its going to be a pain finishing it but its all for me getting better anyways. SO its worth the trouble. I am glad you approve I was really impressed about his sprite myself after I made it. It was kind of hard deciding what needed to be cut out and how much to make him form a cape wearing chick to a whife beater male.
Kaleb Daub
here is a new one made upon request since their is no kaduki megaman sprites as you can see its a WIP but what your thoughts on it so far.
This is based off the Megaman from the Megaman Battle Network game series/The anime Mageaman NT warrior. This is actually my first time using a template so I want to know whats your thoughts on my first template sprite.

Here is the reference.
Megaman NT Warrior

Severity
It looks good to me. Especially the helmet.
X-M-O
Hey, that looks great! I've not seen a Megaman sprite recently, so nice job there. ^^
Kaleb Daub
thanks i am actually going to take this one step further and make it a 8d which means Ii will be attempting my first shot at a diagonal sprite along with spritng on a blank template for the first time.

EDIT: Hurray finished first row although I think I messed a little whats your thoughts? I'm not to sure if I am doing it right maybe its just me.
Kaleb Daub
After my biggest attempt at a portrait edit I came up with this.
My edit

The original by animanon


I would like some input if you think its good enough then I would like to submit it the resource submission fourum.

based off this face set by Pentagonbuddy.And Holder edit I did.


On a personal note to me this looks like it would be a good japanese highschooler maybe what your thoughts.
X-M-O
The Megaman sprites look great; good work on them. ^^

The portrait edit looks good and matches what you're going for in the battler, so that's awesome! I can tell it's an edit because the neck doesn't match seamlessly, but it's very close so most people won't notice that. (You could still get the colours to match more precisely, but you'd have to check the exact RGB on them if your screen doesn't let you see a difference between your added area of the collar and the area that you added from.)
Kaleb Daub
Thanks for the advice I was thinking the same about the colors. Its just that this was a the biggest graphical edit I had ever done to a portrait and wanted some feedback I am still going to do more editing.. AS for the megaman sprites can't wait to see how they turn out.
Kaleb Daub
i am going on a training session to improve my skills so I may not be that active but I am training by making ace generated faces into portraits I started to do one whats your thoughts on my progress
Original
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My portrait so far

Because of the clothing being white its a little hard to see it so you may need to open it up in a transparent able paint program.
X-M-O
The clothing is actually a light blue colour, but very close to white. ^^

It looks really good, keep up the work on these. happy.gif
Kaleb Daub
Thanks for the comment I didn't think my first attempt at this would turn out so good as it is now but this is where it gets hard I have plenty of exp from drawing on paper to make the head and shoulders look pretty good but I have little exp actually do more than what I have done. so doing the arms and chest are going to be the hardest. But I will hopefully be able to start adding making ace portraits to my ablitys list seeing ghoow many people would like portraits for their generated faces.
X-M-O
You could design several clothing/body templates (using an outline of the clothing and body area without being coloured) so that they match face sets regardless of how customised the face sets are. Then all you'd need to do is move the clothing/body part underneath the face set and colour it to match. =]
Kaleb Daub
I guess your right their i will try to do that. U t will defiantly help me in the future when helping others with this.
Kaleb Daub
need serious opinions here please This is a tile set screen shot edit I did the original by Lordwind this is a major scene in my fan game KHU and my first tile edit although this is more of a picture edit then a tile but please tell if you think its good because it will also be a battle back for an important battle and I need to know if there is any thing wrong with picture really I spent over 10 hours working in trail and error.so please give criticizizm where needed.
My version


Lordwind's


Based off of this portrait by Relaxed Chillin and my avatar or the animation in my first post.
Portrait
X-M-O
Your version looks great, and matches the portrait well - though I would recommend slightly more pastel colours, but otherwise it looks fine. happy.gif
Kaleb Daub
Continuing my megaman project I ain't good enough to make faces from scratch so I have been doing my editing and i was messing around with vx and saw ralph a common demo hero character i liked the way he looked but he is way to over used and i found a topic on the vx sight were people were remaking ralph so did one my self. and here it is.

THIS SUMMER IN AN EPIC DIGITAL ADVENTURE RALPH IS....

MEGAMAN NT WARRIOR

Grab your PET's and JACK IN!

Whats your thoughts of ralph becoming the new mega man?
based off the face in the lower right hand corner.
X-M-O
I like the way you've changed Ralph into the new MegaMan. =D
I think it looks great. ^^
Kaleb Daub
Whew I thought there might be something wrong it was a huge edit oh yah I just finished the megaman walking sprite here it is I like but this being my first actual sprite from a blank template I would like to know your thoughts.
X-M-O
There is a slight issue with the third column, second (and third) row where he looks like he pooches his belly out when walking. o.0
Kaleb Daub
I guess your right I will fix that up. Thanks for the advice! wink.gif
Lato
The whole megaman theme is cool and all, I remember playing them on nintendo when I was a kid, but also I like the pixel version of the art much better, its just from a magical time, and its a classic, the edit is good, I just think some things should be left alone.
Clord
QUOTE (Lato @ Oct 11 2012, 10:23 PM) *
The whole megaman theme is cool and all, I remember playing them on nintendo when I was a kid, but also I like the pixel version of the art much better, its just from a magical time, and its a classic, the edit is good, I just think some things should be left alone.

Just wait when companies figure out that it is profitable to do another remake out of a remake.
Kaleb Daub
Thanks lato I know what you mean and you are also right Clord teehee.gif I kinda wish they would make some the older games again with out screwing them up. ph34r.gif Oh yah XMO I cut back on the stomach slightly to where it is equal with the other two frames in the row.
Kaleb Daub
I haven't posted here in a while but I am making Zack Fair from CCFF7 using Ace's Rtp Generator on request and my client says it looks good but need the opinion of others to make sure he is getting good quality. So tell me what you think.

Real Zack
Lato
QUOTE (Kaleb Daub @ Nov 18 2012, 06:44 AM) *
I haven't posted here in a while but I am making Zack Fair from CCFF7 using Ace's Rtp Generator and he says it looks good but need the opinion of others to make sure he is getting good quality. So tell me what you think.

Real Zack


I think its pretty cool looking but did Zack have green eyes? Also a bust version of him would be SO cool!
Shaddow
Yes, all SOLDIERS had green eyes, it was the Mako. Anyways, that looks surprisingly good, even if he looks almost....cute? I can't really describe it, like he lost some of his masculinity in the process, but you can definitely tell it is supposed to be him.
Kaleb Daub
Thanks to all it surprisingly only took about an hour to do.
@Lato I want to also make a bust but I am not yet that good but I ave been doing face add ons or what I call V busts to where it shows the full head and shoulders then goes into a v which I am actually doing on request for someone right now. smile.gif

@Shaddowval I agree that he has lost some masculinity in the process but this is my first shot at it and trying to replicate it with that much masculinity well I just ain't there yet but thanks for the post. thumbsup.gif

Also this is a prototype I wil be making a better one with more details like the brown straps and making the shoulders more like they are suppose to soon. I will also be making the soldier out fit as generater parts for ACE so anyone can have their own soldier with ease.
Clord
QUOTE (Lato @ Nov 18 2012, 06:39 PM) *
QUOTE (Kaleb Daub @ Nov 18 2012, 06:44 AM) *
I haven't posted here in a while but I am making Zack Fair from CCFF7 using Ace's Rtp Generator and he says it looks good but need the opinion of others to make sure he is getting good quality. So tell me what you think.

Real Zack


I think its pretty cool looking but did Zack have green eyes? Also a bust version of him would be SO cool!

Mako infusion makes Zack Fair's eyes to glow. His actual eye color is blue.

I think giving Zack Fair's green eyes is like artistic liberty, this happened to Cloud in the Last Order when he went too close to Jenova. smile.gif

Anyways in my opinion. That does not really look like Zack and more like a impostor.
Kaleb Daub
Yah I know I tried I ain't the best just someone wanted it in this type of graphics and so I tried I wish I could do beter but I am still learning.
Kaleb Daub
Ok on request I am trying to make a bust out of the Ace Zack fair did I will be doing the head last and I still kinda suck at this but what do you think of it so far. I have conflicting emotions. I am trying to imitate more or less than trying to do an exact remake int Ace RTP style.
Kaleb Daub
Hey guys I have a new piece I need advice on. I have been doing a bit more spriting from the template and done a full set of hair for the first time and I am not to sure on well it is. I know it needs some improvement.
Kaleb Daub
hey there haven't posted in a while just wanted to show you guys my first attempt at doing half kaizer spriting

The hair was made by enterbrain.
Ratty524
Not bad. The color of the shorts, however, seems a little too high in saturation compared to the rest of the clothes/skin on his body. You might just need to use a different color for your darkest color to fix it.
Kaleb Daub
yah I can see what you mean I will try something like that Thanks!
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