Okay, now I've decided I'll post a prologue type thing for a story that has been long in the making. It started out as a playground game involving myself and a few friends. That's right, a playground game. That we did in like third grade. However, 2 of the friends that were involved in this game of ours stayed in the same school district when I moved after 5th grade. I returned halfway through sixth grade, however, and we met up in Junior High. This game more or less continued, but not physically. Instead, we gave ideas and such. It became a story. Dakota and I at least planned for a story. We even collaborated a couple times and just brainstormed ideas like mad. However, we never got a chance. Dakota moved to Oregon before our Sophomore year in high school. So, here I am now, a Junior, continuing on with our story we created in third grade.
It's called "Annals of Elendor". This is a science fiction story, so if you're not much of a fan, then I apologize. Elendor is the name of a planet in a distant galaxy from our own. Elendor is not the main focus, despite the title. Actually, the main focus is different with each story (as Dakota and I planned for sequels and stuff.) In any case...I'll start with the first one in the series. I hope you enjoy reading it. Thanks.
WARNING: Story may contain language now or later on that some may find offensive. I apologize if you are offended by anything at any time during your reading of this story.
It's very long. So it's in this spoiler thing just in case.
Yeah...That was pretty long. Very drawn out. Uhm, well, let me know what you think.
I'd really appreciate suggestions and stuff. Like what I could work on and what areas I seem to be having trouble with, etc. I'd appreciate it very, very much. Thanks.