I'm a beginner here, I just want to show you my game is bad or not



Please help me for make a title for my game, but how about Unknown Fate ?
Is that great?

This might make a pretty good topic in the theory forum, and since these look like VXA shots it certainly doesn't belong here. The maps are actually pretty good, but are kinda irrelevant to the help you're asking for.

There are a few general 'rules' (made to broken xD) about titling a game, like that the title should 'sum up' a game or that they should grab attention but ultimately we, as a community, simply don't know enough about your game so its hard to help with something so specific.

You really should think about developing a story of some sort and give us a summary of that so we can see what your game's about.

Okay... this is the story of my game :

A prince from Februry Kingdom want to know, why that castle has fallen from Ronbird army. Before that scene, the messenger
guard say to his father, after that Ronbird army recruit the man, Zordon. That februry armys has becomes very stronger and that man identity
still unknown until he was an adult, (I make my game change some BGM after that character has been adult). that's all part of my game story,
I hope someone will be understand my game.