Thank you, that's kind of what I see it as. I may use it for a certain cathedral in a game I want to male. Might not ever happen, but at least its given me musical inspiration.
Each phrase is supposed to be more powerful than the prior, so (almost) every phrase ended in a crescendo to build for the next. Only exception is the subito piano towards the end, in order to break the continuous build as well as make the last and most powerful phrase that much more impactful.
As for my program, I notate my music using Finale 2011 and then transfer the midi to FL Studio for better sound quality.
Thanks for the feedback