I really like writing poems of all different kinds! Hopefully you will enjoy reading them too You can also hear a few (and more that I didn't write the lyrics down for) at my Grooveshark page! I've got covers and originals on there!
A Better Place
Livin' in this world It's just another day I watch the news on the TV It's full of hypocrites who say What they mean to say But they turn on it Blast away the minds of the innocent Of kids who just want to play In a world the sees no evil Hears no cussin' No overdose druggin' No alcohol commercials that say it's okay The ropes are starting to fray And we'll all fall from the swing That held us in the early days
Empty Minded
One day I was eating A piece of pie When something shiny Just caught my eye
I looked at the ceiling And stared off into space Before I blinked an eye I was in my happy place
Sometimes I'm empty minded I stare off into space Oh yes I'm empty minded I see the world with grace
I'm always empty minded I like staring at your face Oh great I'm empty minded I can't keep up the pace
Jump
Cold dark night Wait until morning "Use your sight" A small voice assures me
Wake from my sleep In my cold damp cell I must escape From metaphoric Hell
I think back to the voice And I look all around Unrealistically glistening Is the eyeglass I had found
I hold it to my eye And look through the glass I look all around And find a secret pass
As I crawl through The voices tell me Which direction to go But ever so subtly
Once I get out I stand at a ledge I take a single leap And at last I'm at rest
(I'm actually planning on making a RM mini game of this poem sooner or later!)
Let me know what you think!
amerk
Aug 17 2011, 10:32 AM
Pretty epic. I've seen a few staff members posting things here as of late and may have to jump on that wagon myself.
X-M-O
Aug 17 2011, 01:30 PM
I think you're having a lot of fun with those poems. =D It's good.
I love the idea of making the poem into a mini-game, by the way. Poetry is good inspiration for a game. =]
Bill Nye
Aug 17 2011, 02:28 PM
Meh, i'm not much of a poet. And i know it. It's decent, i suppose.
Redd
Aug 17 2011, 03:05 PM
Thanks
Jonnie19
Aug 17 2011, 03:43 PM
I love your cover of Snuff Poems are also great
Redd
Aug 17 2011, 06:33 PM
Haha thanks I love that song to death :3
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