I'm pretty noob at all this eventing and stuff and I'm finally getting the hang of it

I've been trying to make an inn with fading and stuff like that but it keeps getting stuck at a black screen .

The event commands look like this.

http://beanie-jess-09.deviantart.com/art/R...Event-253247708

I'm not sure If I've done something wrong?

*I posted a link cause I have no idea how to post screenshots*

The question as to why you end up with a black screen is quite easy to explain: you transfer the player to a diffrent map and thus the rest of the event get's lost.
One way to get around that is to make a switch that activates when you pay the money.
Make the Innkeeper event somewhat like this:

And on the map that you will be transfered to, make an event like this: (Don't forget to set it to parallel process)

And that should do the trick =)

A different way to solve it would be to make a large map, placing both your inn and your reception in the same map, in different areas so they don't show on the same screen.

Then, instead of transfer player, you just use the jump command while the screen is dark. This way, the player moves, but the event still runs all parts.