I've thought about this one over and over, and I decided to go with it. I wanna hear what you guys think about it. Is it too cliche? Does it lack something? Does it need revising? Anywho here we go..
"In another world far from our own, there lived two great nations, the Elore and the Alghast. The Elore are a race of magical human-like beings. The Elore are capable of manipulating nature and using magical spells, but they lack physical strength and rely on their mystical heritage. While the Alghast are an intelligent human-like race. Although they cannot use magic like the Elore, they can however make mechanical inventions that even rivals the strongest spells. As the two races grew so did their nations, as they have reached to the point where they can expand no more, they fought each other over the ruler of the world.
The war between magic and machine lasted many years, until one day when something else sought after the prize that they have fought for. A dark and hideous race had invaded their world, and had laid waste to both nations. The two nations joined together to stop the evil force, but to no avail, as it was far more stronger than the two nations. The Alghast had made a plan to seal away the evil force to another planet inhabited by humans. Using the magical powers of the Elore and the technological wonders of the Alghast, they had created a prison that had sealed the evil force. Six brave souls have volunteered to guard the evil force by forever remaining in the new world. They fused the crystal seals within their own bodies to prevent anyone from obtaining it.
As centuries pass, the prison was slowly weakening. Dark whispers had slowly escaped and started reaching out to the humans. One human who was unlucky enough to hear it, became twisted with dark thoughts and soon became a follower for the evil force. Now that the old guardians are slowly weakening, who will protect the world from the evil force?"
There you go, after that the game starts off and the story get's deeper and deeper as you continue your journey. Feed back would be very appreciated ^^