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After the boss at the bridge rose will disappear but will still be in your party(done intensionally)

Cheat==================
if you want to use the cheat you will have to defeat the two mini bosses to get the password to open the superpower code
with this you can beat the final boss easy cause its kinda hard if your not prepared for it.

the two mini bosses are hard to kill do heres the password if you want the easy way out
Password to get the super power code is: 1994
Password to open the super power is: 11111111

Guide to defeating the finial boss without cheat.
kill grunts to get potions
and explore the whole forest map to obtain scrolls and the dropped potions


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spelling mistakes, lame fight scene characters aren't detailed enough, I can go on for a whole hour.

its a short game
and how awesome can the fight scenes get?
the game take about 15mins to complete it.

You got to be kidding me.

You really need to sort out the poor spelling and grammar.

i thought i fix all the spelling errors O.O
must have uploaded the wrong file

edit:

yep i uploaded the wrong file.
putting up the right one now.

There are still plenty of spelling mistakes. Right off the bat, rescuing is spelled wrong on the title page.
"I love you some much."
"I love u too."
"Im ganna Kidnapp your girl friend for no reason."
I could go on and on, but almost every sentence has that error.

It is also probably bad form to start off saying something to people who don't like the game. You are basically setting people up to not like it, immediately before it starts.

I thought it was kind of funny that you could see what every single thing was called by pressing z on it, if a little unnecessary.

The grunts are a little repetitive. There are a lot of them, so it might be nice if they were a little more varied.

I know that you said Rose is supposed to disappear, but why? That doesn't make any sense.

Anyway...
I know it is discouraging to see stuff like this, but don't let it get you down. Try to read tutorials on everything you can: mapping, events, story-telling, characters and so on. Also, try to read up on your grammar, because that can be a real mood breaker for many games.

My Reaction:


Due to the spelling errors and the overall bland story,Is the reason. Is that better?

~Uh, no. Rather than that why not say why you didn't like the game or what caused that reaction? Try not to spam.
-Harry

... LOL?


This is just killing me. What the hell kind of fight sequence is this? I would have even preferred the defeualt battle effects over this.

Your storyline and characters are as descriptive as the instruction booklet of Super Mario Bros. 2. That is, it's barely informative.

What's the hero's personality, history, etc.? What about the rest of them? Oh and seriously, "Kidnapper" and "Grunt"? I can't see why you didn't bother to name them.

The only excuse I see you have for this is that you want gameplay to be a focus, but it doesn't even look like you even thought much about creating a fun, unique type of game to begin with. Aside from the battle script, everything looks pretty default and bland.

Keep in mind, however, that this is only my first impression, to which you've already set to be bad with your spelling/grammar mistakes, lack of a description on features and story, and overall just a bland presentation.

In addition, there is something I don't understand about your story from the start: The forest this takes place is imaginary? Are the characters all dreaming this, or what?