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Trickster
Story: In 1945, Hiroshima was attacked with a nuclear bomb known as "Little Boy". Just days later, Nagasaki followed the same fate, by the detonation of the "Fat Man". The USA then proceeded to bomb Tokyo, followed by Utashinai and Otofuke. In one year, Japan's government was crippled. Several officials were later assasinated, and riots broke out over even the smallest of issues. Hope was lost when Japan called in aid from the best kept secret in existence- Heaven.
By opening the Great Gate, Japan had saved their existence. Heaven absorbed a lot of the damage done by World War 2, and brought back time to before Tokyo was bombed. Japan's leader had been replaced by a representative of Heaven who surrendered before returning to his realm, and nobody was any wiser except those within Heaven.

Heaven had always been an unstable place, but by bringing the Asian Wasteland into their realm, the last straw had been pulled.
Heaven split into two factions- the Paladins who are sworn to upholding Heaven's divine plan, and the Krows who wanted nothing more than revenge on Heaven and the Paladins. And so war broke out. A war that even Heaven could not contain, so it spilled out into our world, now well into late years of the 20th Century. But even as the world entered the year 2016, the war raged on, leaving only the most powerful Paladins and Krows to fight a battle without meaning. Over the years, both factions had developed their own powers, making the destruction toll on the Human Realm that much higher. Heaven didn't like it. Heaven had a solution.

In a matter of weeks, Heaven had gathered the ultimate Unit, and it was now being deployed into our world. The Reapers. They had the simple goal of eliminating both the Paladins and the Krows- both were causing huge chaos in the Human Realm and it had to stop.
Now, the number of fighters in each faction has fallen drastically, and the remnants of what was once called the "Divine Plan", have now become corrupted souls, who want nothing but to avenge their forefathers, and complete their goal- even if it no longer has meaning or reason. This war is now known as- The Black Chivalry.

Factions And Goals:
Paladins- The Paladins were once sworn to defendin their home- heaven, but following the great war, the now wish only to prove their strength and eliminate the Krows. Every. Last. One.
Krows- The Krows have a single dream in mind- to reach a sacred chamber in Heaven known as "Core". Within is said to be all the knowledge that could posibly be known, as well as the ultimate Entity himself. The Krows need to reach this Core. And destroy it for the terrible judgements made by this Entity. They also have the sort of "Side"goal of annihalating the Paladins though it's not a priority.
Reapers- They have the mission of destroying both the Paladins and the Krows, however they can go about this any way they want.
Some bide their time, some head face first into combat. It's purely up to the individual Reaper.

Majic nd teh uder epik stuf
All three factions are able to wield their own kind fo Magic- the Paladins have "Essence", while the Krows have "Dark Nova".
The Reapers can have either type, but there isn't any difference between the two except that Essence is a dark blue colour with hints of white and silver, while Dark Nova is a Dark purple with hints of black colour running through.
These magic sources are used to perform Seals or Judgements. Seals are used by Paladins and are a mixture of offence and defence, while Judgements which are used by Krows, focus heavily on altering the battlefield.

This is not however, the only kind of magical attack. "Clara" can also be wielded by any of the three factions. Clara is nearly transparent, so it is dodged by Sensing it(More on that below). Its molecules are wild and random almost like a gas, but they are each infused with energy giving them unique properties(ie. I'm making an excuse as to why it hurts you tongue.gif). Clara can be launched in a ball, fired s a prolonged beam, or do just about anything the user wishes. It has no "Attacks" of its own- the user makes their own.
It can also be solidified by enforcing the Clara with more energy, thus crowding it with more molecules. Even though it has the physical properties of a solid object, it can still be moulded to any shape, meaning you can solidify the Clara, then shape it into a cube or spike or any shape you wish- this means it can also be used as defence.

*All members of the three factions have the ability to stop time, by releasing a pulse of signal-like energy from their body. Everything in the human realm ceases, and the only exceptions are Clara, Judgements, Seals and people who know how to wield the any of the three things just mentioned.
*They can also sprout black feathery wings from their back at will that allow them to fly.
*They can sense all unnatural presences around them within a 65 metre radius, including Clara, Seals/Judgements, and any member of one of the three factions.
*Magic works in the basic manner- you use a lot and you'll get tired. BUT! Different Seals/Judgements have different Ranks which reflect how strong they are- the stronger the more tireing. The same goes for Clara based attacks- the more complex the attack, the more tireing.

Check under the Character Template for a list of "Canon" seals and Judgements.

Death and Characters
When you die, then based on your actions in the RP, I will decide whether you return to Heaven(Which can be exited by completing a riddle), Purgatory(The "Waiting Room" between Earth and Hell where people wait until the Messiah returns- in this case, you wait until someone else dies so that you can take their place in the world), or the lovely "Nine Circles Of Hell". Here, you can only leave by tricking the Gate Keeper of each of the Nine Circles by gving them a riddle that they don't know the answer to, for example. I will play the Gatekeepers, so it shouldn't be too hard to confuse the tongue.gif.

You CAN have two characters, however only ONE[1] can be a Reaper- the second must be either a Paladin or Krow. Alternatively, if you already have a Krow or Paladin, then your second character must be a Reaper.

Character Template
CODE
[b]Name:[/b] (Duh..)
[b]Age:[/b] (This isn't Bleach, so if you're 100 years old, then you look 100 hundred years old, however these people also don't die of old age so you CAN be old if you wish)
[b]Appearance:[/b] (be as detailed as possible- a picture is nice but not necessary)
[b]Faction:[/b] (One of the three Factions)
[b]Seals/Judgements:[/b] (You can have up to six Seals/Judgements in your app, but can also train to learn more later IC and yes! You can create your own Non-Canon Seals/Judgements!)
[b]Biography:[/b] (Your character's life experiences in the Black Chivalry up to this point, and if they're a Reaper then you could explain how they were recruited)


Canon Seals/Judgments
This is a list of Seals and Judgements used so far in the story;
Seals

Name: Heavenly Seal- Central Light
Type: Defence
Rank: 5
Description: A large, bright green circle with a Symbol in the centre forms under the user, expanding to about 10 metres. A dome of Essence then forms over the circle, protecting all within- this lasts 6 posts, unless an offensive attack of rank 5 or higher is used on the dome, in which case it is automatically destroyed.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Divine Bullets
Type: Offence
Rank: 3
Description: A white seal forms on the user's palm, and hundreds of high speed projectiles of Essence are fired at the enemy, which alone can't do too much damage but several together can cause heavy bleeding.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Prophet's Fury
Type: Offence
Rank: 6
Description: A white seal forms on the user's back which they can move to the floor and onto enemies- ie. the Seal can be moved.
At any time, the user must simply focus Essence into both hands and clap them together to cause the seal to burn into whatever solid object it is touching, where inside, it will form a ball of Essence. This ball will explode with a huge amount of energ, and an explosion reaching 50 metres.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Glistening Guillotine
Type: Offence
Rank: 4
Description: The signature attack of Saruno- an orb of Essence forms in the user's index and middle fingers, which spreads into a small bow-like shape(But without the strings). When the user waves their hand swiftly in any direction, a wave of Essence soars in that dirction, slicing anything it touches. After cutting through a solid object, there is a 2 second delay before the wave explodes with energy, though the explosin itself only covers a few metres.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Glistening Fangs
Type: Offence/Defence
Rank: 3
Description: Another of Saruno's favourites- A seal forms on the ground, roughly 2 metres in front of the user with a radius of about 1 metre. From this Seal, after 4 seconds, multiple jagged spikes of Essence jut out, reaching about 4 metres in height. This can be used as a trap for enemies, but also, several can form a basic wall for defence. There is a large variety of ways to use this attack.

Name: Heaveny Seal- Messiah's Wall
Type: Defence
Rank: 3
Description: A seal forms in the air, several inches in front of the user's palm. The symbol within the seal thickens and joins, creating a lght see through- blue disk which expands, and forms a shield like shape. This shield lasts forever, but is destroyed when either 2 attacks of rank 3 hit it, or 1 attack of rank 4 hits it. Attacks of rank 5 or 6 will destroy the shield AND deal full damage.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Angel's Orb
Type: Offence
Rank: 3
Description: A simple orb of light blue Essence forms around the user, protecting them from outside attack. It disappears after 5 posts, or when an attack of rank 4 or higher hits it.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Ray Of Divinity
Type: Offence
Rank: 2
Description: A simple ray of thin, piercing energy shoots from the user's index finger, capable of firing through a human, and it moves at a fast rate.

Name: Heavenly Seal- Life Through Death
Type: Other
Rank: 5
Description: The user must stand in the seal which is only 2 metres in radius. Inside, they are protected from all outside force, and can leave or enter the seal freely, as can Krows and Reapers. Anyone inside the seal that kills themselves by means of Clara, will die like normal.
The seal will expand to 110 metres, and anything within it will be sent back to Heaven, and any now-dead living things will be resurrected and sent to Heaven. The person who commited suicde however, will be sent to Purgatory.

Judgements

Name: Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
Type: Other
Rank: 6
Description: A large, 25 metre, Purple Seal forms below the user's feet. Anything within the seal will have its molecules alter at random, meaning solid objects can suddenly turn to liquid or gas, and vica versa. Living things are not affected individually, but if a chunk of the ground were to turn to gas, they would fall through. If the user exits the Seal before it disappears, they themselves will turn to Dark Nova which will fade into the atmosphere- ie. They iz dead.

Name: Demonics Judgement- Moonlight Guillotine
Type: Offence
Rank: 4
Description: This is a variation of the Glistening Guillotine, except that it uses Dark Nova.

Name: Demonic Judgement- Purgery Saw
Type: Offence
Rank: 5
Description: 5 small orbs of Dark Nova form, one on each of the user's fingers. They begin spinning in a clockwise direction, blending into a single dark ring which thickens and expands, forming a thin, jagged wheel that continues to spin rapidly. The disk is thrown, slicing through anything it touches. It can be manipulated after it's been thrown, meaning the user can control it while it's in te air. The disk disappears after
2 posts.

Name: Demonic Judgemet- Greetings from The Reaper
Type: Supplementary
Rank: 4
Description: seal forms several inches in front of the user's palm, which begins to form the shape of a handle. Aftrer turning jet black, a scythe forms out of the handle, creating a weapon that can be used for 7 posts before disappearing.

Name: Demonic Judgement- Trickster's Realm
Type: Other
Rank: 6
Description: The ultimate attack of the main villian in Chapter 1, Jiyuu Kuro-Fuu. After a dark purple seal with a radius of 35 metres forms under the user's feet, 9 tall pillars of dark Nova will erect from the ground(Within the seal of course). Upon touching one of these Pillars, the person will be imbued with violent Dark Nova which expands within the body part that touched it. If the person touched the pillar for too long(4 seconds or more) then there will be enough expanded Dark Nova to cause the body part to explode. No Clara can be used within the Seal.
The seal will wear off whenthe pillars are destroyed, but they can only be destroyed by Clara.

Name: Demonic Judgement- Chuck Norris Kick Fallen Gambit
Type: Other
Rank: 6
Description: A seal of Dark Nova forms on the ground, stretching to a radius of 20 metres. Any once-living things that are dead in the ground covered by the Seal, will be risen up to the surface and re-animated, doing the biding of the user. The seal lasts 10 posts, but if a corpse exits the seal before it disappears, they will re-die, and if the user exits it, HE/SHE will die.

Name: Demonic Judgement- Life Through Death
Type: Other
Rank: 5
Description: The user must stand in the seal which is only 2 metres in radius. Inside, they are protected from all outside force, and can leave or enter the seal freely, as can Paladins and Reapers. Anyone inside the seal that kills themselves by means of Clara, will die like normal.
The seal will expand to 110 metres, and anything within it will be sent back to Heaven, and any now-dead living things will be resurrected and sent to Heaven. The person who commited suicde however, will be sent to Purgatory.


Other Info
Well this RP is actually based on a Manga Series two friends and I are working on. It's split up into four books(Like the gospels), each telling the story from a different perspective, and each consisting of roughly 70 issues. This is of course NOT a commercial thing, just something that we love to do. We made a Deathnote one, we're working on another series called "Lamb Of God", and are now working on this at the same time. A big project, but as I said- the three of us love doing this kind of thing so.... oh well! Here's something of a... "Preview" for anyone who joins biggrin.gif
Trickster
Completion Bump
Sparrowsmith
1) AWESOME
I read the title and thought: "Right, I'm gonna be a bad guy"
so that makes me a krow

2) I wanted a scythe, right from when I saw that I could be evil, and you gave me a scythe:
QUOTE
Name: Demonic Judgemet- Greetings from The Reaper


:']

3) I began thinking, is this gonna be like mafia, or do we get a bad guy?
QUOTE
Name: Demonic Judgement- Trickster's Realm
Type: Other
Rank: 6
Description: The ultimate attack of the main villian in Chapter 1, Jiyuu Kuro-Fuu


so two questions:
can I be Jiyuu?
If not, can I be Jiyuu's right hand man.

Also, the age system, is that how old we look, or how old we are, or both.
Because supernatural creatures wouldn't age at all would they?
TaFresh
Name: Omari Kerim
Age: 26
Appearance:
Faction: Reaper
Seals/Judgements:
Name: Demonic Judgement- Purgery Saw
Name: Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
Name: Demonic Judgemet- Greetings from The Reaper
Heavenly Seal- Central Light

Biography: Omari never had a simple life. He was born poor, he was different from others, and he didn't seem to have any sort of talent. He grew to resent life, and the so called Ultimate Enitity that created it. Until one day when he was 14, he witnesses the a Reaper fighting a Palidin. The Reaper fell down, and dropped his weapon. Omari felt a strange urge coming out of him that caused him to attack and kill the Reaper and the Paladin with a single lash ( the Paladin was attempting a back attack, when the scythe wwent and chopped the Reaper's head....then....yeah....). When help arrived for the Reaper, they only sensed the scythe being used and found some kid practicing his skills. At first, they attempted to kill him, but one of the higher uppers liked his quick talent. He's been with the Reapers ever since.
Trickster
Nice!
Screw it. It's based on our Series, let's hand out the crap...
in a good way.

Canon Characters!!
Name: Saruno Mizuki- Main Hero
Age: 24
Appearance: [No Picture Of Canon Characters Available sad.gif ] He has a dark blue ponytail, silvery eyes and pale skin, standing at around 5'6. He wears a long white suit Jacket reaching his shin, and a white T-Shirt underneath. Black, baggy trousers with belts. Lots of belts. Think Dante from Devil May Cry number of belts...
Faction: Paladin
Seals/Judgements:
Heavenly Seal- Glistening Fangs
Heavenly Seal- Glistening Guillotine
Name: Heavenly Seal- Central Light
Heavenly Seal- Ray Of Divinity
Bio: Saruno grew up as any Paladin did- with no materialistic desires, and to strive only to aid those in need. His father was a firm believer in Heaven's ways, so when the Krows split apart from Heaven, he felt it to be his duty to fight alongside them, which led to his death. His mother however, hated violence, and hated to hate things- she mothered Saruno excessively, and Saruno loved it. Instead of trying to stand out in the crowd like everyone else, he had no problem following and sometimes being "Uncool".
As the fight raged however, Saruno's mother was banished to the Nine Circles of Hell for breaking a new law- all Divine citizens MUST fight with the Paladins. So with the war causing the exile of his mother, and the death of his father, Saruno made it his responsibility to end the conflict, one way or another.

Name: Rosuto Maindo
Age: 28
Appearance: Jiyuu has dark skin, and long silver cornrows, stretching past the bottom of his neck. He is well toned, and stands at over 6'4. His eyes are thin and sharp, partly due to his strong sensitivity to light which forces him to squint. He wears a long red robe with a golden dragon along the right arm, and he has baggy camouflage trousers and sandals.
Faction: Paladin
Seals/Judgements:
Heaveny Seal- Messiah's Wall
Heavenly Seal- Divine Bullets
Heavenly Seal- Central Light
Heavenly Seal- Berserker Roar [Unique Only To Rosuto- basically a strong Energy Beam that shoots from his mouth, Rank 5]
Biography: Rosuto was often discriminated against for his skin colour, being as white is commonly seen as "Pure". He rejected such opinions, and made sure that he would eventually be even more respected than ANY white man in Heaven. Years later however, when the Black Chivalry began, his oppurtunity was lost when he was forced away to war. There he met Saruno who didn't care about how Rosuto looked, and on several occasions has saved his life. Rosuto has always returned the favour, and decided that the opinions of others didn't matter- he knew what he was capable of and so did the few friends he had. That was all the respect he needed.

Name: Jiyuu Kuro-fuu
Age: 6, 6 and 6
Appearance: The thing about Jiyuu's appearance, is that "HE" doesn't have one- there are three of them. Each are six years old, and have messy, short-ish hair. Their faces are not seen as they all wear a plain white mask, but their glowing red eyes can be seen through the mask's holes. They each wear a child's suit- blue coat, red tie, white shirt, brown waistcoat, brown shorts. There is nothing to distinguish between the three. Their voice is a mixture of a boy's and a girl's, leaving an echoeing, disturbing effect.
Their skins are all extremely pale.
Faction: Krows
Seals/Judgements:
Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
Demonic Judgement- Trickster's Realm
Demonic Judgement- Fallen Gambit
Biography: [Lol uh.... spoilers?]
Jiyuu was, in actual fact, a human. He had sinister urges, that went beyond petty. A greedy nature that went beyond Selfish. A crul, uncaring mind that went beyond corrupt. A cut throat relisher of blood, who would rather hug his mother as a corpse than as a living person. When he died, something happened to him that should NEVER happen to a human- he was given all the secrets of hell, and heaven and the paladins and so on. This allowed him to learn the secret way for a human to master Seals or Judgements- he had to split his soul into three Shells. So he chose his siblings who were perfect do-gooders in comparison. With this, his two siblings(Whos identities or genders are never known) became empty. Hollow bodies without meaning, until Jiyuu tricked a Gatekeeper of Hell into splitting his soul between the three. This left three disgusting entities of pure sin to live among the divine realms of Heaven, Purgatory and Hell.
When the Jiyuus noticed that some were unhappy about Heaven's decision in World War 2, they took advantage. It is thanks to these three, that the Black Chivalry came to be.

Name: Souki Tenbun
Age: 25
Appearance: Souki has long black hair with slight tints of crimson red running through it. She has slightly tanned skin, and is tall and slender with light green eyes. She wears purple trenchcoat, with all but the top three buttons done up, and under it she wears a white T-Shirt. She wears casual black, wide-ankled trousers with ribbons flowing from the back. She has fingerless gloves and leather boots on.
Faction: Reapers
Seals/Judgements:
Heavenly Seal- Central Light
Heaveny Seal- Messiah's Wall
Heavenly Seal- Life Through Death
Demonics Judgement- Moonlight Guillotine
Name: Demonic Judgement- Purgery Saw
Biography: Souki is the only female in the Reapers, since most are forced to focus on Essence as it's "Less Violent" than Dark Nova.
As the only female Reaper, it is her duty to prove that women are as powerful as men, and she does so very often by beating Rosuto to a brutal pulp. She joined Saruno and Rosuto in the later stages of the conflict, where the numbers for each side had begun to wear thin.
She was hunting them down, and beig that she is generally a thinker when it comes to her Reaper Work, she tried to study the two Paladins. She soon realised that both had a point to prove, and that if they could sacrifice themselves to take back all the bloodshed, then they would. So for this, she admired them and asked if they'd mind escorting her to Purgatory, acting as a simple Citizen. The pair fell for the ruse(And her) and although danger came often, they still kept thir promise to help her. Eventually, after a brief encounter with Jiyuu, she joined them on their goal- to end the Black Chivalry. Although she was rich and spoiled as a child, the hard life and freedom that she led with Saruno and Rosuto was just te kind she wanted.
She embraces every moment of life, knowing that it can end at any time.

People age like normal, but they don't die of old age meaning you could have a 500 year old Paladin, but he would LOOK 500 years old.
This isn't quite all of the main characters,(There are 2 more companions and a LOT of enemies) but these have te most important roles in Chapter 1. I'm digging up the rough drafts of the first few Chapter 1 issues,(I'm sure I'm forgetting someone....) so if I find anyone else I'll add them.
Sparrowsmith
QUOTE
Name: Jiyuu Kuro-fuu
Age: 6, 6 and 6
Appearance: The thing about Jiyuu's appearance, is that "HE" doesn't have one- there are three of them. Each are six years old, and have messy, short-ish hair. Their faces are not seen as they all wear a plain white mask, but their glowing red eyes can be seen through the mask's holes. They each wear a child's suit- blue coat, red tie, white shirt, brown waistcoat, brown shorts. There is nothing to distinguish between the three. Their voice is a mixture of a boy's and a girl's, leaving an echoeing, disturbing effect.
Their skins are all extremely pale.
Faction: Krows
Seals/Judgements:
Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
Demonic Judgement- Trickster's Realm
Demonic Judgement- Fallen Gambit
Biography: [Lol uh.... spoilers?]
Jiyuu was, in actual fact, a human. He had sinister urges, that went beyond petty. A greedy nature that went beyond Selfish. A crul, uncaring mind that went beyond corrupt. A cut throat relisher of blood, who would rather hug his mother as a corpse than as a living person. When he died, something happened to him that should NEVER happen to a human- he was given all the secrets of hell, and heaven and the paladins and so on. This allowed him to learn the secret way for a human to master Seals or Judgements- he had to split his soul into three Shells. So he chose his siblings who were perfect do-gooders in comparison. With this, his two siblings(Whos identities or genders are never known) became empty. Hollow bodies without meaning, until Jiyuu tricked a Gatekeeper of Hell into splitting his soul between the three. This left three disgusting entities of pure sin to live among the divine realms of Heaven, Purgatory and Hell.
When the Jiyuus noticed that some were unhappy about Heaven's decision in World War 2, they took advantage. It is thanks to these three, that the Black Chivalry came to be.


dibbed.
Love the masks bit.

If I do play as him, will I make appearances to the MCs or just be there for the final battle?
Trickster
No you'll have appearances if you want. Just being there for the final battle would be booriiing so you probably wouldn't want to do that.
He isn't meant to be "Scary" like some Animé characters. He's supposed to be more so disturbing tongue.gif
I've decided on a ew "Rule" if you would;

Jiyuu Kuro-Fuu is the leader of the Krows(As he is meant to be anyway)
Saruno Mizuki is the leader of the Paladins(As he is meant to be MUCH later on in the series)
Souki Tenbun is the leader f the Reapers(She isn't in the series, she just gathers support but for this let's make her a badass general tongue.gif)

If one of the factions has no leader the it doesn't matter- if I see someone doing particularly well, they'll receive an offer of becoming the general for their faction.

Faction leaders are naturally stronger than most other Divine Citizens, therefore they can use Seals/Judgements for longer before being low on Essnce/Dark Nova, and can take more damage before whoops.gif
A Factions doesn't NEED a leader/General.

EDIT: Only now do I realise that I haven't made my character yet! This is unacceptable!

Name: Musei Shinzui
Age: 24
Appearance:
Faction: Reaper
Elemental Core: Metal
Seals/Judgements:
Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
Demonic Judgement- Trickster's Realm
Demonic Judgemet- Greetings from The Reaper
Heaveny Seal- Messiah's Wall
Heavenly Seal- Angel's Orb
Biography: As a boy, Musei had little knowledge of right and wrong. He learned how to exit the Great Gate to Heaven as a young age, so he spent a lot of time with humans, realising that even though they do horrible things at times, and even though some are completely immoral, that they do so in order to complete what they beleive is right. This made Musei more like a human than a Divine Citizen since he had similar beliefs that The End Justifies The Means~ Nichollo Machiavelli. An inspiring quote for him in his young, open minded head which proved that even a Divine Citizen can be swayed by a single man. When the Black Chivalry started however, Musei's opinion of the humans changed drastically. He no longer believed that Humans were good at best- he realised that they were BETTER than the Divine Citizens.
For this, he spent several years trying to be noticed, and trained himself in strategic warfare, a lot of which he gained from reading a human book titled- The Prince. With inspirational humans like Napolean Bonaparte and Nichollo Machiavelli, Musei swore to end the destruction to the human realm, and when the Reapers' numbers began to wear thin, Heaven's superiorsrecruited him by sheer desperation- they had noi dea of his abilities until he actually begun his work.
Spirit_Master_X
THIS...IS...FUCKING...SWEET!!!

Name: Wes Raven
Age: 21
Appearance:

Faction: Krows
Seals/Judgements:
Demonic Judgement- Purgery Saw
Demonic Judgement- Greetings from The Reaper
Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
(Original)
Demonic Judgement- Deadnaught
Rank 6:
Description: A seal is casted under the user's feet. His body is then coated with Dark Nova, rendering him untouchable for a brief period of time. Only Reapers are able to penetrate through it. If the seal is broken before the time is up, the user will become vulnerable to the majority of all attacks. Other Judgements are inactive while in use.
Biography:
During the Black Chivalry, Wes was usually seen gathering intel for the Krows. His mocking tone grants him to be the "asshole" instead of a cocky warrior. In all attempts, he tries to taunt the Paladins, to draw their attention towards him by using his gifted acrobatic skills to dodge them. He is no stranger to combat neither. During the Chivalry, the Krows leader, Jiyuu Kuro-Fuu, witnessed as Wes single-handedly defeated several Paladins. However, as a reaper approached, Wes proved no match. If it wasn't for his master, he would've been sent to the Circles.
Trickster
Niiiiccee!
So 2 Reapers and 2 Krows. Now if we can get a few more members(Some paladins of course tongue.gif) then we can start!
If you wish, you can also apply to be the general/leader of your faction UNLESS the proper leader joins later, or has already joined.
As I said- Saruno is the DEFAULT Paladin Leader, Jiyuu is the DEFAULT Krow Leader and Souki is the DEFAULT Reaper Leader.

Also I apologise for any typos- I've been laaaag-g-g-g-g-iiiiiiiiii
for weeks!
Hirei
Will make profile ;p Sounds interesting.
Nicsp
Oh, why not? Gives me an opportunity to make my first apperance as a girl character.

Name: Wilma Strois
Age: 26
Appearance:

("Because real men fight with armor!" "But it's a she..." "DETAILS ARE UNIMPORTANT!")
Faction: Paladin
Seals/Judgements:
Heavenly Seal- Central Light
Heavenly Seal- Angel's Orb
Heavenly Seal- Ray Of Divinity
(Made by me, if it's ok) Heavenly Seal- Sacrifice
Rank: 6
Description: The caster's body is enveloped with light, all of the caster's energy is then released, with no control over it whatsoever (Being therefore, able of friendly fire), the resulting explosion can reach up to 100 meters depending on how much energy the caster had. The effort for this seal however, will knock out the user, and may kill if used too often.
Core: Lightining
Biography:
Back at the start of the war, she joined the war, accompanied by her husband-to-be. While attacking a group of Krows, her love had no other option but to use the Sacrifice Heavenly Seal, accidentally bringing his death due to the fact he was alredy very tired. She's completely moved by revenge, not caring about how she'll obtain it or how many more people will die for it. She is always serious and keeps her focus on the mission at hand. Her loyalty to the Paladins can be seen as enormous, obsessive even.
Trickster
Nice. Our first female.
Guess you missed your chance at being the first Hirei tongue.gif
The Heavenly Seal you made WOULD sound a bit Overpowered, but since it's proportional to the user's energy it seems a-Ok.
Once Hirei and another Paladin(Unless of course Hirei IS a Paladin) we can probably start and keep this open so that people can join long the way.
Ryuga
Sounds interesting.

Name: Boris Crane
Age: 59
Appearance:
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Subtract the eyepatch.

Faction: Paladin
Seals/Judgements:
Heavenly Seal- Messiah's Wall
Heavenly Seal- Glistening Guillotine
Heavenly Seal- Glistening Fangs
Heavenly Seal- Ray Of Divinity
Biography:
Approaching sixty, Boris has been through many battles, being one of the most experience paladins. In his prime, he was possibly one of the strongest, and has made a name for himself as a result. At his age, however, he finds his body won't respond the way it used to. His stubborn nature unfortunately keeps him on the battlefield, still doning his trademark armor. He cares little for true ideals of the Paladins. He fights because on the battlefeild is where he truely feels alive.
Hirei
Name: Sepheria Rayne
Age: 21
Appearance:
Click for appearance
Faction: Paladin
Seals/Judgements:
Heavenly Seal- Central Light
Heavenly Seal- Angel's Orb
Heavenly Seal- Ray Of Divinity
Heavenly Seal - Glistening Fangs
Heavenly Seal - Divine Bullets
Biography: Sepheria was an apprentice at the start of the War, her master was a well known Paladin who wielded a lance While fending off a Reaper, her master had to save her, but was stabbed in the back by a Krow. In anger, Sepheria slew the Krow with her fallen Master's lance before getting attacked by the Reaper. The paladin slew the reaper after sustaining great injuries. Reinforcements came to her aid in time and gave safe-haven to the wounded Sepheria. Now she fights to uphold her master's name and skill, by wielding the lance her master was so well known for, and slaying any who stand in the way of Heaven's divine plan.
Trickster
Eh... Seals/Judgements aren't meant to be Elemental-Based, so you can remove Purifying Flames.
Elemental attacks don't come in to play until towards the end of Chapter 1, because they're excessively strong lol.
Basically- every Divine Citizen has one of the following "Cores" within their body;
Metal(Hard and conducts heat and lightning greatly.... what more could you want?), Fire(It's hot. Nuff' said), Ice(Ice. For all your Icey Ice needs), Water(Siiiimple..), Wind(Obvious enough), Wood(....), Earth(The ground and natural walls), lightning(Lightning is golden in this... not blue) or Mist(Using the smoke and steam around you, converting it to a thick mist for cover).

Because they're meant to be so strong, I wasn't planning to introduce them in this chapter, and if I did then it would be later on In-RP.
Basically, using your "Core" lets you convert Clara into your element which you can then use for its own attacks. Converting Clara into your element, shaping and moving the element, and just about anything you can do with your element reduces the size of your Core.
When your core is smaller, yur attacks are too since the Core naturally tries to keep itself active and prevent it from running out by reducing the amount used.
When your Core runs out completely, you must rely on using the enviorenment around you to source your attacks-
so if there's a lake beside you and you've run out of your Core, it can take hours of rest to restore so you'll have to use the water in the lake to renew your Core(ie. "Refill" youcore so that you can do elemental attacks again). Core runs out quite quickly.

So what do you think..? Should Elemental attacks be included? Should they be gained later on? Should there be some kind of "Challenge" or conditions someone must fullfill to unlock their element? Comment.
Basically, I think they're too strong to have at the beginning because being hit by someone's lightning element when they have their core at the max is basically the same as being hit by actual lightning. Yes these are Divine Citizens, but it still hurts like crap tongue.gif
Anyway- if they ARE included in the beginning, there will be restrictions cool.gif
Like your Core running out faster than usual.

AAAANYYYWAAAAYYY...... I think we can start once a decision is made on Elemental attacks!
draken29
This RP sounds good

Name: Dart Iverone
Age : 23
Appearance:


Faction: Reaper
Seals:
Heavenly Seal- Divine Bullets
Heavenly Seal- Messiah's Wall
Heavenly Seal- Angel's Orb
Heavenly Seal- Ray Of Divinity


Elemental Core : Fire ( It's Dart, of course its fire laugh.gif )
Bio : Dart was an Orphan since his parents killed when a battle between Paladin and Krows happened near their village. Since then he took care of his younger sister alone and venture out to seek refugees. In one of the village that they visited, he met an ex-Reaper named Saragine who lives in the villages. Saragine took care them and taught Dart swordsmanship and how to become a Reaper. After 3 years of training by Saragine, Dart decided to venture again, now to find the one that attack his village and killed his parents.
Dart was given Saragine's sword named Trigger which Saragine used before she decided to stop being a Reaper

(You said that Souki is the only female Reaper at the moment so I made another reaper that has retired as a NPC, okay ? )
Trickster
Alrighty. Then Souki is the only ACTIVE female Reaper tongue.gif

You might want to add what Elemental Core you have just in case it's decided that we start with element attacks.
Same goes for everyone else
Spirit_Master_X
Screw the elemental attacks! Let's start now!!! O_O lol
Trickster
Lol Okeydoke then. It makes more sense for them to be unlocked later anyway :/
OPENING!!
Spirit_Master_X
I also created my own original Judgement. I edited it on my character's profile. It's called Dreadnaught. Is it alright if I add that?
Kisuke Urahara
Wow...

Name: Yamakami TolSeakeire
Age: 20
Apperance: - without the eye patch
Faction: reaper
Seals: (Question: the posts about the length of time we can use magic for are they our posts or anyone posting).
Demonic Judgement- Greetings from The Reaper
Demonic Judgement- Ray Of darkness (mine happy.gif )
rank: 2
like ray of divinity but for the aliment.
Demonic judgement- Shield of darkness.
Rank: 4
A seal forms in front of the users hand nothing can pass though this seal and is instead rebounded off of it.
This seal will dissipate after 6 posts or unless someone hits it with a seal of level 5 or higher. (seal can be moved).
Demonic judgement-Gateway to hell
rank: 6
This seal can only be partly formed the other part of the seal must be tattooed onto the users skin. A seal forms at the users feet the size of wich depends on the users energy. anyone who is touched by the users hands or their weapon will along with the caster down into hell in 4posts. as well as having every one who was dragged down's energy sapped. The user cannot exit the seal or they will die. And no other judgements or seals can be cast by the user. is this fair enough?
Core: Metal (this core thing can we have like half cores with one one thing and the other anther).
Bio: When he was incarnated he had been fighting for the paladin faction with his brother (might make him my other character). As he grew older he saw that the paladins weren't fighting for heaven any more. In a rage Yamakami took down three paladins and went into hiding. The reapers found him when he was 17 and brought him to their cause. In his hatred for the paladins Yamakami swore he would not use any paladin essence again, now he follows the reapers cause like a... (thing meant to follow causes).
Trickster
@Spirit: Make it so that you can't use Seals/judgements while it's active and it's fine. You still have Hand-To-Hand and Clara after all tongue.gif
@Kisuke: No it's one element only, sorry. And when it says a certain number of posts, it means your posts.
Nicsp
If you don't mind, i'm giving Wilma the lightining core then.
Kisuke Urahara
QUOTE (Trickster @ Apr 25 2010, 07:53 PM) *
@Kisuke: No it's one element only, sorry. And when it says a certain number of posts, it means your posts.

YAY the thing I had in mind only works that way
Sparrowsmith
QUOTE (Spirit_Master_X @ Apr 24 2010, 05:04 PM) *
[Show/Hide] Spirit's post
THIS...IS...FUCKING...SWEET!!!

Name: Wes Raven
Age: 21
Appearance:

Faction: Krows
Seals/Judgements:
Demonic Judgement- Purgery Saw
Demonic Judgement- Greetings from The Reaper
Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
(Original)
Demonic Judgement- Deadnaught
Rank 6:
Description: A seal is casted under the user's feet. His body is then coated with Dark Nova, rendering him untouchable for a brief period of time. Only Reapers are able to penetrate through it. If the seal is broken before the time is up, the user will become vulnerable to the majority of all attacks.
Biography:
During the Black Chivalry, Wes was usually seen gathering intel for the Krows. His mocking tone grants him to be the "asshole" instead of a cocky warrior. In all attempts, he tries to taunt the Paladins, to draw their attention towards him by using his gifted acrobatic skills to dodge them. He is no stranger to combat neither. During the Chivalry, the Krows leader, Jiyuu Kuro-Fuu, witnessed as Wes single-handedly defeated several Paladins. However, as a reaper approached, Wes proved no match. If it wasn't for his master, he would've been sent to the Circles.



Alright!
For once I get to have Spirit on my side xD
This should be fun.

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[Show/Hide] Jiyuu Kuro-fuu
Name: Jiyuu Kuro-fuu
Age: 6, 6 and 6
Appearance: The thing about Jiyuu's appearance, is that "HE" doesn't have one- there are three of them. Each are six years old, and have messy, short-ish hair. Their faces are not seen as they all wear a plain white mask, but their glowing red eyes can be seen through the mask's holes. They each wear a child's suit- blue coat, red tie, white shirt, brown waistcoat, brown shorts. There is nothing to distinguish between the three. Their voice is a mixture of a boy's and a girl's, leaving an echoeing, disturbing effect.
Their skins are all extremely pale.
Faction: Krows
Seals/Judgements:
Demonic Judgement- Shifting Nature
Demonic Judgement- Trickster's Realm
Demonic Judgement- Fallen Gambit
Biography: [Lol uh.... spoilers?]
Jiyuu was, in actual fact, a human. He had sinister urges, that went beyond petty. A greedy nature that went beyond Selfish. A crul, uncaring mind that went beyond corrupt. A cut throat relisher of blood, who would rather hug his mother as a corpse than as a living person. When he died, something happened to him that should NEVER happen to a human- he was given all the secrets of hell, and heaven and the paladins and so on. This allowed him to learn the secret way for a human to master Seals or Judgements- he had to split his soul into three Shells. So he chose his siblings who were perfect do-gooders in comparison. With this, his two siblings(Whos identities or genders are never known) became empty. Hollow bodies without meaning, until Jiyuu tricked a Gatekeeper of Hell into splitting his soul between the three. This left three disgusting entities of pure sin to live among the divine realms of Heaven, Purgatory and Hell.
When the Jiyuus noticed that some were unhappy about Heaven's decision in World War 2, they took advantage. It is thanks to these three, that the Black Chivalry came to be.


Question, could I have the Reapers judgment as well, or instead of one of my other judgements?
Because let's face it, six year old with a scythe? bad ass.

Anywho, I'm gonna go ahead and post.
Hirei
Sepheria's Core will be Fire ;3
Trickster
Okeydoke.
And yes Sparrow... you can have your precious Scythe tongue.gif
Trickster
Someone post >:(
Sparrowsmith
awesome

I'm already planning my evil speech for when I take the source cool.gif

anyway, seeing as I own the three bad guys, I thought I'd make a kind of way to tell them apart.

The first one - he, as he prefers, is the leader. Though he has no real gender he is simply most of what remains of the original man. His temper is matched only by his love for guilty pleasures. He enjoys tormenting his foes and the thrill of sinning He embodies the sins of:
Wrath
Lust
Greed

The second one - no preferred gender, is the arrogant one. The first one feels a great tie to he/she due to the fact that he is the plan to take the source in pure form. His sins are:
Envy
Pride
Greed

The third one - prefers she. She is, if anything, the worst one to encounter. She is very lazy, which means she tends to play with her foes less. To her it's easier to kill fast and feast. She is almost always hungry. Her sins are:
Gluttony
Sloth
Greed

They all have greed because they are all power mad.


The further they are from one another, the more unique they become. When in one place they often act as one.
The funny thing is, and you may enjoy this, they are atheist.

They believe the source is just that, an energy, and that beyond heaven and hell there is no greater being or designer, and that the whole world is running as a spill of power, in fear of some unknown eye.
they want to give the world a god, them - an unholy trinity, and show them the punishment and mercy the truly deserve.

they claim to know they will win, because no god has stopped them yet.


Hope these updates of character are aloud, they'll help me at least.
Trickster
Nice. Of course they'e allowed tongue.gif It' not completely Canon.
You might want to add you elemental Core as well since I've decided to include them :/
Sparrowsmith
hmmm I guess fire tongue.gif

Unless I get three, then it's fire ice (water?) and metal.

But if not, fire will suffice :]


I had an idea for when the cores actually 'activate' as discussed earlier, if you'd like to hear it.
Trickster
*Pretends to be interested*
If you must.....
...
...
...
joke tongue.gif What is it?
Sparrowsmith
I make an attack on the source, and open one of the three doors to the source.
When I open the first door a massive expanse of energy pours out and empowers all the supernaturals, giving us our elements.

This also means that, should I ever open the second door, we can get another massive overload of energy, and new powers.

Finally, the third door, that's when I become god xD

Ofcourse, there could be as many and as few doors as you like.
Trickster
OK sounds interesting.
Now post >:(

ALSO!! Inspiring music woot.gif http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t9qqLrdOzDg
Sparrowsmith
nothing to post about tongue.gif
Trickster
Yes you do. That's what the music's for!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CozLOol8tU
If you were close enough to hear Wes, then you would've sensed us....
ah nevermind. It wouldn't make sense for EVERYONE to pile up at he same place tongue.gif
Sparrowsmith
I'm in hell, remember tongue.gif

That guy was in hell, but Wes was ages away by the time we realised he was gone.


oooo requiem for a dream
Hirei
Won't be able to post until I get finals done just letting ya know ;p
Trickster
Sorry I haven't been on. Just been healing from bloody birthday beatings sad.gif
My arms are now 3x bigger rofl
Sparrowsmith
happy birthday!

question:
If any of my guys die, do they go to the normal places, or do they die for good?
Like can their masks explode and be all epic ph34r.gif
Trickster
No they die like everyone else. I said earlier that they're overpowered in a REALLY unfair way, and it does involve the masks.
But no. They don't explode tongue.gif
Probably should've mentioned that they grow weaker when they're farther away from eachother.....
the more of them there are together, the stronger they are, so if they're all in seperate realms, they'll have practically no energy to use on Judgements or Clara.

But I still stand by my decision- the masks' abilities aren't being implemented into this tongue.gif It's fine in the series because you have the classic
"Willpower pulling the hero through an impossible fight" but if willpower could just make you invincible in this, everyone would be able to "Push through" even though they should be dead tongue.gif
Maybe in chapter 2 the masks'll be implemented fully....
if Jiyuu survives cool.gif
Kisuke Urahara
about dieing. when we are sent to heaven or hell and such forth is their some kind of penalty for dieing or can we just come out(following the rules for that section of course).
Trickster
Eh I want to bring in some kind of penalty aside from just fullfilling the condition necessary to leave, but I can't really decide on a fair one.
Lower energy- you can't perform as many Seals/judgements or clara attacks? That's the fairest I could think off, though it's a pain if you were to die a lot of times and have practically no energy.....
Forgetting a Seal/Judgement- one of your Seals/judgements are chosen at random and removed? This seems REALLY Roleplay breaking since.... peopl can be left with no attacks.
Loss Of Wings- your wings are removed and take [INSERT NUMBER HERE] posts to come back?

Other suggestions and opinions are welcome.
Trickster
OK Kisuke that Judgement is fine, and yes 6(being the highest rank available) is fine. Just to clarify- it sends everyone within the seal to hell, and saps them of all their strength? I just think you should know, that would leave you unconscious for at least a day....
I'm fine ith it, but I don't know i you want to lie down in hell for over a day tongue.gif
It's your choice though.
Kisuke Urahara
if I lie dsown in hell so do my opponents and I can try to stop them getting out.

why dod'n't we just not allow them to leave death zone for X number of posts
Trickster
I suppose. You're all suffering from the same disadvantage so.... it doesn't matter too much.

If we stopped them from leaving for a certain number of posts, it'd have to be a relatively high number or else it's not even a penalty.
BUT! If we have people stuck in hell for a load of posts, it'd just be boring...
Kisuke Urahara
You could meet with the other players but that would be like not dying at all...

what if Ur magic was temporally robed for X number of posts
Kisuke Urahara
OK I think I'll make a new character
(if Ur first character dies can Ur second character switch alinements)

Name: Oguri (little chestnut)
Age: 14
Appearance::
Faction: paladin.
Seals:
Heaveny Seal- Messiah's Wall
Heavenly Seal- Glistening Fangs
Heavenly Seal- Aldur's bow.
rank- 4
a bow of light forms around the users left hand, a variate of arrows with different can be fired.
Core: metal
Bio: He and his brother were very close when they were younger but now, thanks to Yamakami's defection they are at one another's throats. Even the age-gap cant separate Oguri's skill in which he draws even with his brother
Sorry for double post.
Sparrowsmith
QUOTE (Trickster @ Apr 29 2010, 10:57 PM) *
Probably should've mentioned that they grow weaker when they're farther away from eachother.....


I already said somewhere that they become unique as they move away from one another.
I guess they are more powerful closer to.

I'm fine following this room.
If I'm the big bad, then surely divide and conquer should be the only way to stop me tongue.gif

QUOTE (Trickster @ Apr 30 2010, 03:40 PM) *
Eh I want to bring in some kind of penalty aside from just fullfilling the condition necessary to leave, but I can't really decide on a fair one.
Lower energy- you can't perform as many Seals/judgements or clara attacks? That's the fairest I could think off, though it's a pain if you were to die a lot of times and have practically no energy.....
Forgetting a Seal/Judgement- one of your Seals/judgements are chosen at random and removed? This seems REALLY Roleplay breaking since.... peopl can be left with no attacks.
Loss Of Wings- your wings are removed and take [INSERT NUMBER HERE] posts to come back?

Other suggestions and opinions are welcome.


How about, with the exception of hell, you also need someone to come collect you.
Hell, as said before, needs 9 riddles to escape.
Trickster
Maybe.... a comrade has to rescue you.
But there'd need to be a way of communicating with eachother without automatically knowing that the other person has died tongue.gif

@Kisuke; No since Reapers have special training to be abl to use both Dark Nova(Judgements) AND Essence(Seals), so since your second character is now a Paladin... I suppose you could be a Reaper in TITLE, but you still wouldn't be able to use Dark Nova....
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