Legacy
Feb 24 2010, 09:31 PM
Something i did when i was bored. now that it's finished i would like some pointers on how to make it better.

thank you, all and any C&C is welcome
Holder
Feb 25 2010, 03:17 AM
Nice one Legacy, the first thing I'd say is that there's far too many colours used, Gale counts that there's 858 different colours. I would try to drastically reduce this.
There's also a definite difference in the tone of the head and body, when correcting the colours I'd either select the colours used on the head or what you've reduced to on the body.
As a final thing on the second row third column you've got the wrong frame in there.
Sorry if I've been a bit too picky on that, it is good, just needs a bit cleaning up.
Legacy
Feb 25 2010, 08:25 AM
Ah thank you. Ill try tyo fix that, and reduce the colours