You've got some really nice coloring going on there! The colors themselves and the style like the eyes are really appealing and well drawn as well. The hair is a bit large, seems more like a wig because the top (not the spikes in the front, the part that curves from the back and usually follows the head shape) is really high. If you want to keep it like that, go ahead, just wanted to bring it to attention. The only thing I see as off is the neck: the left portion (our left) is pretty small and it looks as if that white piece is covering the neck. (If that's intended, then never mind!)
Excited to see you post the finished version on DA!
[Show/Hide] My Project Logo by Axerax Still going on Construct Classic. Currently drawing dialogue portraits for the characters. Some can be found on my DA.
Mystery of the Seventh Tower: Reborn -------------------
------------------------------------ I've got my Platform Engine now. Still have to tweak it a bit to allow the 'action' part xD. ------------------------------------ Running into some errors, I'm trying to fix them up as soon as possible though. ------------------------------------ *Fixed* Let's go back to tweaking shall we? ------------------------------------ Mega thanks to DarkYoshi for helping me on so many things. I'm understanding things better now. Just need to see how to call on some object states...mmm... ------------------------------------ Coding AI for enemies ------------------------------------ *Project Moves to Construct* ------------------------------------ I've established a deal with Christian Andersson for his music. That guy is a Fantasy Music GOD. ------------------------------------ Contacting several people for pixel work commissions. ------------------------------------ Gathering some more BGs. ------------------------------------ Editing current sprites for use in Construct. ------------------------------------ Waiting for v1 for Construct. ------------------------------------ Finishing Game Flow Design. ------------------------------------ Finished Story, yet to finalize. ------------------------------------ Finished Red and Yellow tower's level design. ------------------------------------ Finished Aeiner's Sky Port design. ------------------------------------ Character Design time. ------------------------------------
A project developed by Ambry. This used to be my old RMXP project but I converted it to GM8 and now Construct due to the game play possibilities. It's an action platformer with RPG elements and slight twists here and there. The project is based on 'The Seventh Tower' series by Garth Nix, but I assure you, I'm changing a lot of things!
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