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> Lullaby, A creepy Poem for a game :)
Jonnie19
post Nov 18 2012, 02:25 PM
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Are you trying to rise from your lullaby?
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Lullaby

Here he comes
Around again
Are you trying to rise?
From your lullaby
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Just close your eyes
And rest your head
You’ll always feel safe
Inside your bed
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Take your friend
Or leave them behind
Just be aware
Of what they might find
--------X-------
Stuffed in a corner?
Feel like you’ve been stitched up!
Breathe a deep sigh
And enjoy your Lullaby
--------X-------
The beady eyes
Avoid their gaze
Or they will send you
Into your Lullaby
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X-M-O
post Nov 18 2012, 03:56 PM
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That's confusing, lol. I'm not sure if the lullaby is good or bad. XD
The third stanza talks about enjoying the lullaby, and the fourth seems to warn against it. 0.o


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Jonnie19
post Nov 18 2012, 04:02 PM
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That is exactly what we're looking for tongue.gif


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post Nov 18 2012, 04:04 PM
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I think it is supposed to be confusing, but do you think this is something a kid would be running around singing? That is what I'm unsure on, it's great, but is it something a kid would say.


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