Story Outline Options

[Nycre]

I am not sure if I want to stick to this kind of plot, so I was hoping some of you can give
some criticism before i get more in-depth. Please and Tank you!

Plot - The main character's father is an herbalist. He has become ill and
the player must find the cure using your father's notes. You soon find out his
disease, and have to travel the world in order to save your father, for the only
cure is a rare plant that can only be found on top of a dangerous mountain.

Rising Actions - The main character's father is getting sicker and sicker
each day. He could not do his work, he can not move or talk. the character discovers
his notes, and learns about different plants, and tries to find them to cure
his father. The last plant left in his notes is a rare plant only found on top of an
dangerous mountain which no one dares to climb. The player travels the world
looking for ways to get to the top of the mountain, and will find other
companions to join him.

Climax - The character reaches the mountain and fights off deadly foes
and people who are also looking for the plant for its powers. The character finally
reaches the point to find out that the once and powerful plant has been withered away
and dead for years.

Falling Action - The character returns home and waits by his fathers side as he slowly passes
away. After his death the character dedicates his life from preventing this disease from taking more deaths

The End

[Nycre]

Interesting you said this because I have went a little deeper into making this story, and I added
a character that dose fall in love with the main character.
As for the main character I also made him a training knight who then changes his occupation
to become sort of a doctor to save his farther. The Idea of the ending was to let the player
think of what might happen to the main character after his farther dies. Would he find a cure?
or will he give up and turn to a new page into his life.

So the ending is still the same, thanks for the tips.