Alive - Title Screen and Logo Concept, Feedback/Suggestions Options

[Vexus]

Hey first time posting here hehe.

Anyway I'm changing the previous bland title screen from alive to something "animated" and I would really like some opinions/suggestions on how to maybe improve it or if it looks good already.

I'm going to upload a video as it's better explained this way than trough screenshots.

Link:

Link (I'm sorry for the hiss sound I don't know where it came from)

The logo scene is still getting some edits here and there but that's currently the new layout. (Now will have to find some sound)

If you wait for like 12+ seconds the title screen will switch to a random scene (There are currently 5) which show other people you might or might not meet

Logo scene and cut scenes can be skipped by pressing enter which takes you to title screen.

So, good/bad?

Thanks for the feedback

This post has been edited by Vexus: Nov 11 2012, 04:43 AM

[Lato]

I can't read any of the stuff in red, it looks just like paint was thrown on the screen, like a blood stain. Everything else looks pretty cool, I like the lighting and shadow effects going on. But there isnt much point in putting text in a video if no one can read it.

[Vexus]

I can't read any of the stuff in red, it looks just like paint was thrown on the screen, like a blood stain. Everything else looks pretty cool, I like the lighting and shadow effects going on. But there isnt much point in putting text in a video if no one can read it.

The logo scene is still getting some edits here and there but that's currently the new layout. (Now will have to find some sound)

Taken from the first post.

The red font says "Digital Mind Studio" using a custom font.

Studio might be a little hard to read but in youtube it gets resized from 640x480 to a smaller "screen" it kinda makes it look blurry even with 480p quality.

Anyway I tried increasing the font size:

[Show/Hide]

How is that?