Magical Art and Candy, May not contain Candy Options

[Shaddow]

So yeah, decided to start posting random things I am doing for your harsh judgements! I've started off by trying my hand at some bigger sprites. My first one I've done so far is this one:

I was trying to capture the same image as this:

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Which is a drawing Dragoncookie has done for one of my RP characters. So yeah, basically I'm looking for feedback, did I compare it well, was it shaded nicely? Did I capture everything? Improvements? Insults? Jeers? Er...perhaps not those last two.

[Lato]

I always like seeing the bigger sprites done, I have never actually done one that big myself. The only thing I see that is a little off from the picture is that the white waist part of her shirt is SLIGHTLY to thick from the pic, maybe just slim it down 1 pix square and I think it would be perfect, it seems to have a nice balance to me.

[Jens of Zanicuud]

I agree with Lato as regards the dress, but in my opinion you could left iy as it is, since it's really good.
I can't tell the difference between the pic and the character.

Jens