[Art] Critics will always be helpful ^^ Options

[Ndoelicious]

I switched from manga style to semi-realistic, but I don't think it's good for RPGM..
Umm, the page seems to not fit when I'm going to insert another drawings, can anyone help me to fix it?
And thanks for the critics ^^



This post has been edited by Ndoelicious: Oct 9 2012, 04:19 PM

[Queue]

I think both pictures look really good.

I love the detail and texture in your work but I feel for what makes up the detail theres a distinct lack of perspective (which I suck at anyways) and foreshortening. They're very artistic and abstract but the inclusion of humans calls critique.

Your anatomy is as mentioned very good but for your most recent picture how the grass has been drawn (lack of bulk and very short) it makes the characters appear shorter than they likely are. The female's anatomy specifically the direction of her head versus the angle of her body does not look correct and the arm placement in perspective should be lower. Adam looks very feminine and could do with some broader shoulders, thicker eyebrows and manlier eyes (but thats me).

Overall I would recommend working on your perspective. Otherwise I really like your detail.

This post has been edited by Queue: Oct 16 2012, 12:57 PM

[Ndoelicious]

I think both pictures look really good.

I love the detail and texture in your work but I feel for what makes up the detail theres a distinct lack of perspective (which I suck at anyways) and foreshortening. They're very artistic and abstract but the inclusion of humans calls critique.

Your anatomy is as mentioned very good but for your most recent picture how the grass has been drawn (lack of bulk and very short) it makes the characters appear shorter than they likely are. The female's anatomy specifically the direction of her head versus the angle of her body does not look correct and the arm placement in perspective should be lower. Adam looks very feminine and could do with some broader shoulders, thicker eyebrows and manlier eyes (but thats me).

Overall I would recommend working on your perspective. Otherwise I really like your detail.

Thank you, qyouqyou >.<

I just love details, which most will never want to touch since it's not even worth admired by the viewers..lol
I did google all of those plants, such as bellflower, red lilly, apple trees, and whatever there are in my garden, I draw them ^^

It's not it's short, but the boy is actually sitting, but not visible(see where his lower chest curved to the back?)
Hmm, thanks for your correction, but for the woman, it's actually a pic I've found earlier, so that's why I'm pretty sure it's correct lol ><
Yeah..the Adam...that's my biggest flaw. I was going to draw two women, but since it'll looks perverted, I had to change to 'Adam and the Eve' theme..which is too late since I've done the details T_T
sorry about that~

Sure, it's been only couple months since I study this kind of arts, your critics are very welcome ^^

Resized for you. ^^

This is great! I love the detail on the "garden".

Thanks on the usual resize...since whenever I tried to, it fails and the pic doesn't appear T_T
Garden of heaven...well, there's no such clothes on Heaven, right? ^^