[Art] Critics will always be helpful ^^ Options

[Ndoelicious]

I switched from manga style to semi-realistic, but I don't think it's good for RPGM..
Umm, the page seems to not fit when I'm going to insert another drawings, can anyone help me to fix it?
And thanks for the critics ^^



This post has been edited by Ndoelicious: Oct 9 2012, 04:19 PM

[X-M-O]

I've resized it for you so it fits into the post quite nicely.

I love the detail and the way you brought the character's imagination into her bedroom like that.
Seems she's been reading J.R.R. Tolkien's book and is visualising it. ^^

The one thing I'm not sure of, is if her head is leaning sideways against the wall or if she is just facing slightly sideways (because it just seems a little off-balance). Either way, it's not much of an error and still looks great. =]

I've love to see more works like this! It's very creative!