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post Sep 29 2012, 09:45 AM
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This is the first 2 chapters of aperosnal science fiction adventure project im working on, specifically for a comic or webcomic. I wanted to ask your thoughts on therse:

CH1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18rVHBbd...dD9igh0zgk/edit

Ch2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hX7I-ir...EGj3aOWpIA/edit

Be sure to tell me about as much as you can, characters, pacing, setting, style. I'd love some cconstructive criticism.
Thanks in advance.
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Shaddow
post Sep 30 2012, 12:51 AM
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I felt like I was back in grade school with all that red! The story seems pretty interesting mushroom, I haven't gotten to read the whole thing yet, been busy, but I will check it out when I get some more time.


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