Please review what ive got so far Options

[heartlessmushroo...]

This is the first 2 chapters of aperosnal science fiction adventure project im working on, specifically for a comic or webcomic. I wanted to ask your thoughts on therse:

CH1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18rVHBbd...dD9igh0zgk/edit

Ch2
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hX7I-ir...EGj3aOWpIA/edit

Be sure to tell me about as much as you can, characters, pacing, setting, style. I'd love some cconstructive criticism.
Thanks in advance.