RM Skill: Undisclosed
All right, so I normally do not ever submit my own written works anywhere online (past results have ended in theft), however this will be a topic where I will submit a couple of things that I'm interested in receiving feedback on (nothing I will be publishing, these are strictly personal works and are copyright to me). =]
For now I'm only going to submit a poem to see if I can get the kind of feedback I'm looking for; if I get enough, I'll start posting up some pieces of a story that I've been wanting to finish writing, but haven't had the motivation to complete (it will be a short story, unless feedback here pushes me to write more, lol).
Here's what I have for now, an old poem I wrote back in High School. ^^
The Blind Child
I was born blind, I see no colour. I am sidelined, I have no mother.
I have been marred, And you will agree, It would be hard To live like me.
In the darkness I still see light, In the vision-less I still see right.
What I envision Is not fine arts. It is precision Defining hearts.