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[X-M-O]

All right, so I normally do not ever submit my own written works anywhere online (past results have ended in theft), however this will be a topic where I will submit a couple of things that I'm interested in receiving feedback on (nothing I will be publishing, these are strictly personal works and are copyright to me). =]


For now I'm only going to submit a poem to see if I can get the kind of feedback I'm looking for; if I get enough, I'll start posting up some pieces of a story that I've been wanting to finish writing, but haven't had the motivation to complete (it will be a short story, unless feedback here pushes me to write more, lol).

Here's what I have for now, an old poem I wrote back in High School. ^^

The Blind Child

I was born blind,
I see no colour.
I am sidelined,
I have no mother.

I have been marred,
And you will agree,
It would be hard
To live like me.

In the darkness
I still see light,
In the vision-less
I still see right.

What I envision
Is not fine arts.
It is precision
Defining hearts.