Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[Magical_RuNE_Kni...]

! >//<'\ XD thank u. i think u just need to give urself a little bit more time and just enjoy the process, instead of thinking about what ur doing wrong.
But u r definitely capable of doing shading that might satisfy u.. And i guess u could say that u don't really need all these fancy things to recreate something similar with what u have, or what u r comfortable with.


Maybe try duplicating the shade layer, and blur the duplicated copy... or make an over-top layer that emphasizes contrast for everything, and blur it. U can also try changing the layer mode to something like "colour burn", "colour dodge", or "overlay" too.

i personally found this tutorial incredible though, and it will prolly help u too! \o/: http://www.artinstructionblog.com/drawing-...light-and-shade
The lady who writes it is a professor and really helps u understand light/ shadow theory.

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Okay, this is my latest attempt... I think it's at least better then the previous one



What do you think about it?

Jens