Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[Shaddow]

Actually I think that is his Main Character who is a guy XD

[Jens of Zanicuud]

@Shadd

SHE was a FEMALE, not a GUY. And I can't reveal what project does this belong to, not yet
I didn't think I was sooo bad...

@Rune

Thanks a lot
Well, you surely gave me a good idea My second problem is... that I'm not able to colour it as I wish.
Any suggestions?

Jens

[Magical_RuNE_Kni...]

@Rune

Thanks a lot
Well, you surely gave me a good idea My second problem is... that I'm not able to colour it as I wish.
Any suggestions?

Jens

Thank u (>-< )/

...Well, so it is a girl, right?.. (sorry! lol.. '>-<) And also, what kind of colouring are u aiming for?

You could even just do flat colouring with coloured outlines to start off. Or, if u want something with a bit more form, u can prolly try GIMP or yea, Sai. Sai isn't free though.
Alternatively, there's nothing wrong with traditional colouring styles; and especially if don't have a tablet, or if you feel you need more practise to understand colouring, it might be better to shade with a pencil first and add colour later.
Real-life/ reference drawing can also help a lot with practise. \o\ i hope my suggestions help?

This post has been edited by Magical_RuNE_Knight2001: Nov 3 2012, 12:46 PM

[Jens of Zanicuud]

@Rune

I've tried flat colouring, but I feel I'm very incapable at doing that... let's say... I'd like to learn how to properly flat coloup it before shading, since the colouring I've employed really disappointed me...

@Clord

Yes, but this was discussed earlier on the previous pages
Haemos and Noctis are inspired by RE lickers (yeah, exactly them). If you manage to find my first graphic request topic, I asked for a character which was the right mix between a RE Licker and the Sangrophage from Magic the Gathering... then, I received no answers and made it on my own... but that was the original idea.

Jens