Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[X-M-O]

You would have to do a lot of editing to make it work properly, I'm not sure what else to tell you. =\
I can see that there is a lot of area that can be removed without ruining the details, but all I can say is that it just needs a lot of touching up here and there to get it to work properly without just blurring it.

[Jens of Zanicuud]

You would have to do a lot of editing to make it work properly, I'm not sure what else to tell you. =\
I can see that there is a lot of area that can be removed without ruining the details, but all I can say is that it just needs a lot of touching up here and there to get it to work properly without just blurring it.

This is version #3.
Unfortunately, I'm quite good at drawing but I lack some editing abilities...
Anyway, This should be the right compromise between #1 and #2...



Tell me what do you think about it...

Jens