Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[Lato]

Custom cutscenes are always cool to see, I like your lighting effects, I think to many ppl just focus on the char and forget about the background atmosphere. However your monster looks to much like a Resident Evil Licker to me. Keep up the good work.

[Jens of Zanicuud]

@Mustaklaki
I honestly haven't understood your video's purpose...

Custom cutscenes are always cool to see, I like your lighting effects, I think to many ppl just focus on the char and forget about the background atmosphere. However your monster looks to much like a Resident Evil Licker to me. Keep up the good work.

Hey, Resident Evil lickers were exactly the base
If you give a look to my first request (an old post buried inside the request section) you'll find my request was to create a monster which was a sort of mix between a licker and a Sangrophage (a monster from magic).
There are differences, however:
my creatures have eyes and haven't their brain exposed.
In addition, they can't walk the walls and the ceilings, they aren't zombie but only quadrupedal blood-eating creatures... and exist in six different types [Haemophages, Noctiphages, Siderophages, Lymatophages, Helliphages and Necrophages]

This chapter closed, then I'll ask for another feedback.

What's the best picture, in your opinion, between these two?
This is part of the opening cutscene of TryAdIne eFfect :: Chapter 2...
The robot is VORS Blame (see the project main page if you need some more detail...)

[Show/Hide] Version #1

[Show/Hide] Version #2

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Aug 10 2012, 11:28 AM