Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[Magical_RuNE_Kni...]

Same, i like the slightly edited Haemophage picture; the second one w/ the little bit of black around the eyes.
It makes it look less innocent/friendly. : ))

i think i like the 1st cutscene image though. The mood of the scene seems meek and dark, and the character looks weak/ vulnerable.
Having a small mouth, rounded face, lighter build, and shorter nose adds to this vulnerability; it gives her child-like qualities/ physicality.

Edit: ...and the angle of the face is more accurate. >< Remember that the nose is in the centre of the face.

This post has been edited by Magical_RuNE_Knight2001: Jul 11 2012, 02:19 PM