Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[X-M-O]

The "Haemophage" image looks neat, but I like the black around the eyes better than not having it (it adds a lot to the picture, despite only being a small edit). =]

The second set of images is hard to compare... not because the differences are subtle, but because they are almost too different, lol.
The first one has a more feminine appearance (smoother, more curves) whilst the second one is more detailed and has less of a feminine appearance (especially in the face). Also, the second one seems to be more muscular with a lean body; so the breasts are completely unrealistic in size, lol. (She would fall forward, and the total body fat percentage is generally larger if you have breasts at that size - just saying from a girl's perspective, because it looks like a tomboy that wanted plastic surgery for some unknown reason.)
Hope that helps. ^^

Keep it up!
Practice will get you where you want to be!