Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[Ndoelicious]

Oh, the first one is better, for me.
It looks like this one,
Stalker

Well, about the cutscene...for me it looks that it has less emotion. I can try and draw you that if you want, it's for free anyway
But you have to color it on your own(still, if you want to)

[Jens of Zanicuud]

@Ndoelicious

Oh, what? No, thanks, the first images of this topic have already been discussed
And as regards the cutscene, I've already solved the problem...
I need some feedback for the newest ones

Thanks anyway

@X-M-O

Thanks for the reference, but I need some English lessons: with "tag" you mean that line below the Spectra's logo?
So you would modify the "working for our future" statement?

What do you mean with "more realistic?"

Thanks again for the feedback,

Jens

[X-M-O]

@X-M-O

Thanks for the reference, but I need some English lessons: with "tag" you mean that line below the Spectra's logo?
So you would modify the "working for our future" statement?

What do you mean with "more realistic?"

Thanks again for the feedback,

Jens

By "tag" I mean the part that connects and is open at the top of the image (it connects the card to a clip that connects to a shirt or lab coat).

By "more realistic", I just mean that the tag needs to look like it would work properly with a clip.

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Oh, thanks a lot
In my personal vocabulary, "tag" meant something like a sort of "label" (provided that tagline is a sort of "subheading")...

Learning langauges while posting on a forum. Amusing, isn't it?

Jens