Haemophages and other cutscenes..., (Need a feedback!!!) Options

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone,

I'll treat this topic as a sort of "garbage collector" in which I'll post some of my game's cutscenes / pictures in order to get some feedback.
At the moment I need some feedback about this.

You are free to give feedback about the old pictures, but I'd like to know something about the newer one

Thanks in advance

old overtoure
I'm working at Tryadine Effect Project by November 2011, but never really designed how Haemophages (i.e. monsters which appears in the game) could look like.
A couple of days ago, I was hitten by an idea and drawn this creature.
1.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage

Then, I wasn't satisfied and slightly edited it.
2.

[Show/Hide] Haemophage (reissue)

What do you think of the picture? What was the best one between the two?
I'd really appreciate to receive some comment...

I had some problem too with Day 3 ending cutscene.
In your opinion, what's the best picture between those three:

1.

[Show/Hide] Drawn with Paint.NET, coloured with Paint.NET

2.

[Show/Hide] Drawn by hand, coloured with Paint.NET

3.

[Show/Hide] Edited Cutscene

Thanks in advance,

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Nov 19 2012, 09:15 AM

[Magical_RuNE_Kni...]

Well.. it kinda depends on what u mean by manga?
Like, there're many different styles; is there a particular style or way that u like? Like u want something more chibi/cute?

i draw manga, but i don't think it always looks very chibi. ( -D-)/ haha

...
i think it might know what u are meaning though. i think... u prolly want to reduce the amount of wrinkles of the face.
Also maybe make the eyes a little more abstract and define the femininity of them. Like, emphasize the eyelashes and curvature of the eyes, and also maybe try to draw with a light, delicate hand.
Here, maybe this will help? i hope u don't mind me drawing over her face..." :

[Show/Hide] i tried to keep it very similar to the original.

Like i tried to make the top of the eye a bit darker. i also did not completely draw in all the lines. i hope u get the idea im trying to communicate... (-D- )\

Edit: Erp, wait, this sounds bad, but... er, the picture is female correct...? (>-<)

This post has been edited by Magical_RuNE_Knight2001: Nov 2 2012, 02:13 PM