My Character Idea..., Just a sketch of what i think a good hero for my RPG would be Options

[frenzy95]

While opinons on the graphical look of the character would be great!

I wanted peoples opinion on the general intro of this character!

anything you dont like about his story or design?

PS: The 'UltimateOmegaUK' is another Alias i use

About the character:

Name: Galric

Age: 21

"Leader of the battalion of the City Of Ether Troop, Galric was medaled for his bravery on the field he killed all that stood
in his way but cared for hes team... A freindly attitiude is kept when he is speaking to allies but seems to treat others he does not know
sarcastically... Record of his previous life involving the loss of his entire family in a fire that burnt down hes families manor could relate to the reason hes so horrible to people he does not know... a matter of trust and defense.

Hes skills with the blade raised since he had been training with swords since he was adopted by the Military Govenors wife... although the wife disagreed... the Military Govenor Lucien would only accept hes son to be a warrior and able to defend himself."

... thats just a little concept of his story explaining a little bit of his personality

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[Kaust]

First off, I'd say this is too close to a personal project to belong in the theory forum.
Its also a little hard to say anything about the character as there is nothing but a picture and you want us to ignore the graphics...

[frenzy95]

First off, I'd say this is too close to a personal project to belong in the theory forum.
Its also a little hard to say anything about the character as there is nothing but a picture and you want us to ignore the graphics...

I agree completley, now that im in a better mood I have improved the post as signifcantly as possible please dont ignore the graphics haha id love opinons on everything thank you.

[Shaddow]

The general idea of the character does not seem too bad, if a bit cliched, he really comes across as every rpg hero ever. The only thing he is really missing is a solid case of amnesia, which I hope he develops later in the game.

It does seem like a solid concept, but I hope you will flesh out the character quite a bit more before placing him in a game, perhaps some examples of his dialogue or a bit more history on him besides 'his family died, he was adopted and raised as a warrior'. You could expound upon how he grew up, what his relationship is like with his foster parents, those sort of things. I hope this gives you a few ideas on how to improve it.

[frenzy95]

The general idea of the character does not seem too bad, if a bit cliched, he really comes across as every rpg hero ever. The only thing he is really missing is a solid case of amnesia, which I hope he develops later in the game.

It does seem like a solid concept, but I hope you will flesh out the character quite a bit more before placing him in a game, perhaps some examples of his dialogue or a bit more history on him besides 'his family died, he was adopted and raised as a warrior'. You could expound upon how he grew up, what his relationship is like with his foster parents, those sort of things. I hope this gives you a few ideas on how to improve it.

Thank you for the comment! i take into account what your sayin, i will expand on his story with how he grew up better aswell as hes relationship with his foster parents hopefully if a game goes well with him in it i can perphaps explain it through an actual ingame experience

I agree... he sounds like a mix of every cliche Rpg Hero in the world xD but hey... thats how i roll haha... and now that you mention it a bad case of amnesia was what i was hoping to imply in the game xD just trying not to make him seems corny... just a charactor everyone can relate to and preferbally not hate

Yet again thanks for the comment... feedback really helps me perfect hes storyline and character.

[Mustaklaki]

I highly suggest not using that picture in anything ever
Should just outline it and fill it in with photoshop

[Magical_RuNE_Kni...]

I like what u came up w/ so far actually. It's not bad. : D
The picture is nice too, it's great that u put up a ref! Thanks, it really helps. ' v ' did u draw it urself?
I'm being honest btw, I think it's great u put up that drawing. (!)

About the description, i like it too. : ) Ive studied psychology though and I think the only thing I'd say is to maybe make the link between why he treats strangers with sarcasm more clear. Like, what I mean is... Him having his house burned down wouldnt necessarily cause him to dislike people. If anything, there'd be a higher chance of him developing OCD (obsessive compulsive disorder) or something like that. : )
If he treats strangers with sarcasm, it could be because of his parents/ friends of rich lifestyle influencing him maybe. Or he was so busy fighting, he never got proper socialization; or in his environment, people coped with stress/ awkward situations using sarcasm.

I dunno, just my opinion and really, it's up to u! But have fun and please don't be discouraged. ' D ' >^<