i think your pictures are very cute! : D I love the 1st one a lot, i really wish i could draw more feminine like you...
Also, i love the variety in perspectives/poses. Not a lot of people like trying out different poses and stuff, so that's really impressive for your age, wow.
... XD U make me want to draw in schoolbooks more...
idk if you want constructive critique btw, (or even from me) but i can try to offer some to u. Whenever my sister gave me critique, she'd roughly draw over my pictures to give me a better sense of what she meant, and i could follow/refer to her lines if i wanted to. i could choose to erase them too, if i disagreed, and i liked it more than saying "blah blah arm is blah blah bloo"... XD
Anyway, here; i hope u do not mind me drawing over them... i picked 3.. X0 :
i'm not sure how to explain what i did, but yeah, u can choose to consider the edits i made or not if u want.
And yes, i liked them! Cheers back to u and have a nice day. : D