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[Strawberry]

So like I wrote this story for Ghost Shards awhile ago, but I don't really remember actually writing it. O_oa Hmmmm...

GHOST SHARDS: PRELUDE
Copyright 2012 by Soulforge Entertainment
Written by Stephanie Southwell

*+*+* Drifting Melody [Aelina] *+*+*

Chapter One

The lights dimmed as a young girl of about sixteen walked upon a wooden stage. Every sound in the room slowly came to a halt, as her sweet smile brightened the crowded bar. Deep inside she was shaking with fear - a feeling that became worse as her lips parted, creating a melodic sound throughout the chilly night air. Her voice was soft, yet powerful.

When the sound faded, there was a long silence before the patrons began to clap joyously at the performance. The girl grinned, tucking her curly azure hair behind her pointed ears. Perking up, she saw the sudden movement of shadows in the background. She tilted her head in confusion, watching the figures leave the lodge. She stepped off the stage, quick to follow her curiosity.

Opening the side entrance of the inn, her search became hopeless. A deep, soft blanket of snow covered the peaceful village of Evertear. With no leads on the mysterious figures, the girl headed home.

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These three stories below are each set in the same universe - the Ghost Shards universe that is. Pick your favorite.

Ghost Shards ~Prelude~
[A spoiler-filled story that takes place years before the game]
A collection of stories that reveal the backstories of the seven playable characters: Aelina, Narie, Demi, Kyran, Poppy, Malechite, and Reina. Could give away too much.

Untitled A
[Previously known as Corinne's Diary - takes place over 100 years after Ghost Shards]
A story involving Corinne Rautio, a young pixie/demon moving to the Royal City of Launus to gain an exciting life in the city. She later becomes the lover of Prince Alyster Natheen-Valena - until she discovers he's into Necromancy.

Untitled B
[Suggested by my fiance - occurs 4ish years before Untitled A]
While traveling the broad ocean in search of a cure for his voiceless sister, Seiko Quartz's ship is attacked by sea raiders. Along with the pirate captain's daughter, the two of them are stranded upon an island with no hope of returning home... soon.

[Nub Cake]

I think the Ghost Shards ~Prelude~ sounded best of those three, i liked B too, i just found it a bit confusing with the ending

"the two of them are stranded upon an island with no hope of returning home... soon."
I'm left with a question, "soon, what?"

If its cleared up it might give a more interesting story
Although it gives me the ideas of they soon figure out a way to return

[Strawberry]

Haha. I'm not very good at writing synopsises. XD

I would love to write about the events before Ghost Shards - I'm just afraid that it would ruin the actual game experience.

The second one is basically like this:
Corinne moves to the royal city and becomes a courier. The prince falls for her, and they date. Then a couple of months into their relationship, she finds out he's into necromancy - raising the dead, creating weird dead creatures, dealing with blood, etc. Freaky stuff. She tries to leave him, but he stalks her. She seeks out her childhood friend Noko for help, and the royal family is banished from Valena for their "evil deeds". The Order then must recruit a new royal family to lead the country.

That's how that goes. Well, supposed to go. XD

As for the last one - I don't really know much about it as my fiance suggested it to me. ^^;

[Nub Cake]

I like A the most now i guess
Interesting story, i'd love to read or play the story, also, if you ever would need some help on the writing, i'm available, i love to write, just have eventer on my type as i think it's whats right when i work alone

But you should go for A [The second one] if im correct

[thatbennyguy]

I would like to see Untitled B as a story. Mind you, I would like to see all of them as stories. They all sound very interesting, and if they're contributing to a game, it would be unique to have fiction accompanying an RPG Maker game. I'm not sure we've had much of that before, and it would be pretty darn fantastic! In other words: yes, yes and yes; I would like to see all of these written into full-length novels and published as movies as a trilogy that rivals Harry Potter, Twilight and Hunger Games in quality. Would you do that for me? Pretty please?

[Strawberry]

Tee-hee. Thankies!

So I created this character for an unknown story that is kind of in development... Oops! ;

Name: Lielle Farawood
Nickname: N/A
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Weapon: N/A
Height: 5’4�
Weight: 132 lbs
Race: Elf
Occupation: High Priestess

Likes:
ï‚© Rainy days
ï‚© The colors blue and violet
ï‚© Fried salmon and potatoes
ï‚© Swimming

Dislikes:
× Rats
× Spinach and broccoli
× Thunder
× Exercising

Abilities and skills:
+ Summon Blades – Conjures up one or several small swords to strike foes. Inherited from her father.
+ Thorn Armor – Creates sharp needles all over her body when someone with dark intentions tries to touch or harm her. Cannot be controlled. Inherited from her father.
+ Holy Mending – Hastens the regeneration of wounds through touch.
+ Repel Evil – Knocks back any undead, demon, or dark person within a certain range.

Personality:
Despite living a life of poverty, and then losing her mother, Lielle tends to always look on the Brightside of things. Lielle can be considered serious to a fault, in which she does not like to joke around – even if to lighten the mood. She has a tendency to take care of those in need, even if they try to push her away for their own reasons. Her greatest goal is to use her powers for good, even if they are feared in some ways.

History:
The daughter of a basket-weaver, Lielle never really got to know her father; even though her mother used to tell her stories. According to her, he was a powerful Elven wizard that was merely traveling through their small hamlet of Thornhill. Whenever Lielle would ask the other villagers about him, they would claim he was an evil demon in disguise. Instead of scaring her off, though, she became all the more curious about who she was and her history.

Upon reaching the tender age of 18, she went on a pilgrimage to become a full-fledged Sister in the royal city's cathedral. While being an under-study, she wrote to her mother every week, and at first she got a letter back each time; yet as the months continued, she received less and less. Something was wrong. Lielle hurried back home to Thornhill to find her mother severely ill with a powerful sickness even she could not cure. Lielle tended to her mother until she died.

Lielle did not give up hope, however, as she still had one known relative left in life: her father. Was he really just a sorcerer? Where would he be? Gathering clues led her to the castle, to one of the highest ranking men available: an arch-mage named Aylmer Brezen. What she learned not only surprised her, but in fact, it made her happier. Her father was nothing more than a powerful old man.

Relationships:
 Daughter of the Arch-mage Aylmer Brezen

Trivia:
 Has a snoring problem; a loud one, in fact
 Despite loving all living creatures, her favorite animal is a panther
 Because of her serious nature, Lielle only dates in long-term relationships; thus only had been with two boyfriends