Screenshot Critique, Please read first post Options

[kayden997]

So, your first reaction might be "WHAT? IT'S BACK," or "Don't we have a thread for this," or somewhere in between.
Allow me to explain.
As you may have heard, the old screenshot thread was taken down due to people not posting actual advice on another's work. Now I know some would love to 'receive' actual advice so I thought we should see how this would work out the second time over.

Titan hasn't been around lately to moderate the Screenshot Showoff thread. Most of you should know that it's a place where you can post your finer work for others to look at. But some don't want to show off their work without the typical "how does this look." leading to the next person critiquing. That means that he/she is not done it but needs advice in order to "be" done.
The purpose of that thread is to show your best to the people who come to look for inspiration from the very best; you. But how can they be sure it's the very best if they realize you just said "does this look good here," and thus has to read the next post to find out the solution.

The main purpose of this is to post your maps you believe needs a second look before finalizing. Anything theory based, create a topic for it.

If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message detailing your concern
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So what do we do now? How do we get our advice?
Simple, the Screenshot Critique thread.

Here you can post your maps, battles, title pages, anything in-game related you believe needs advice. Post what should be done next or ask for recommendations on something.
What are the rules?
- You must post critique to the previous image before you post your own.
- Posting an image is optional, but you must post critique (no chit chat, PM each other).
- All other forum rules apply

Last words: this is only a test to see how far we can go without breaking the rules. If all goes well... it's here to stay.

And remember, spoiler boxes for big images.

[supercow]

@yuu-mon musuedo: its kindda dark, is it just for special occasion? cuz i certainly dont wanna look at that all day, well maybe im just not used to seeing vx, but that high contrast of vx and dark room really hurt my eye.
then again im not a vx person , dont really like vx high contrast
on other subject,
1. the room looks wasted with empty space
2.the room looks like in living room to relaxed/stuff why is there an urn/bucket doing there? it is in average middle-family modern place, right?
, maybe im terribly wrong, but i certainly dont have that in my living room.
3.whats the sofa for far out there in the corner on the middle? and its "incredibly long" or maybe weirdly long.
4. i dont think you need to put shadow for the sofa because sofa is not that high
5. just go with either japanese style of cushion pillow or sofa , putting them together like that looks weird, and waste of space.
if you make the sofa way shorter and make 1 person chair, it might work.
6. dont you have any other furniture to put?


@luv kitty12 : it looks beautiful , would be better if it has different house or style.
from quick look i dont see any major fault at all, it certainly look like it took some time to make good job
the children playground looks cute i never seen it before, did you make that? nice idea