You have a great presentation - it instantly draws the player in! However, the logo is a little hard to read and the font can get that way too. o.o
I shall now comment on your characters (I didn't read the actual story). The facesets you are using a bit overused - meaning I've seen them used a lot, which unfortunately don't make your characters as original as they should be. Though I understand if you're not a good artist and that's all you have. ^^;
I think the fact that Neo has amnesia, should only be done if you write it just
right. A lot of classical RPGs use this for their heroes, but that was back when... Um... I don't know where I'm going with this thought actually. Lols. I'm little worried that it could be tooooo cliche, but I want to see how you present in game first. I wasn't really suprised that the only girls listed here were mages/healers. Now, I personally love
female healers (when I play MMO's or certain WRPGs, that's what I do), but there must be a way to make it interesting!
Now I'm not really going to comment on how each character has their own element (I mean some of my favorite games did this - Legend of Dragoon for example), but I think that having their personalities match their Syphon is a bit... too coincidental? I don't know. o.o
Some of your features are not really features. If they were I would have more than 2 on my game. Lols.
* Emotional Story and Great Mapping - These are really
up to each and every player themselves, and not you.
* Nature Interacting - This should probably be explained better. It's not good to expect everyone to have played your first game. ^^;
I really wouldn't use music from well known games, such as Chrono Cross. If you do not wish to use the RTP (in which I do not blame you at all), then maybe going to a site like Newgrounds or http://www.sakari-infinity.net/
for free RPG music. That's what I used to do.
Or you could request a musician, and you may never know! One may want to help you! ^^
Lastly, I saw that you had a google-image picture used in the background of one of your menus. I think you should try using something much more simple. ^^ And maybe you could fool around with the saving/loading scripts to make them more original? I believe I have seen them around before in other games.
I hope my advice helps you improve! That's all I really want. ^^
As soon as I can, I might download your game and give it a try! :3