RM Skill: Intermediate
((i really hope this is the right place to put things like this))
Anyway, this is my story, plot and character ideas for the project i'd like to create, the grammar may be off and there might be some spelling errors, other than that please let me know how you feel about it.
Flames of Valor
Fate sometimes forces a man to do what he must, but when fate seems to have turned on him, a man will stand against it for what he believes is right.
Long ago, when the land was still young, Humans, Elves, and Eulisu (a tribe of beast like men) lived together peacefully in the world of Enterra. One day, from the far north, an evil presence emerged. A dark warrior claiming to be the leader of a race of Demons came to lay claim to the world. He made himself known as Demon King Banir. Not to be seen as weak, the people of the land rose up to defend their home. The war lasted nearly a year and the races of Enterra fought hard, however their efforts grew futile. Soon a third army arose from the desert nation of Iskandar as if from nowhere. A race of beings who called themselves Taivians came to the aid of the Allied forces. Even with their superior magic and weapons, the war seemed to favor the Demons. The Taivians grew worried and prayed to their god, The Phoenix Taivas. She heard their prayers and saw that the world was truly falling into darkness, so Taivas sought out the bravest of her kin, she found him in a simple farmer, who had taken up a blade to protect the world so his newborn child would have a good, peaceful life. Taivas melded with her follower and together, they turned the tides of war. The warrior lead the allied forces to the dark throne, a mountain in the far north where the demons had emerged, a great battle soon took place, many died, but at its climax, The warrior, with the powers of Taivas within him, fought The Demon king Banir Face to Face. The battle was intense, but ended with Banir taking a near fatal wound and retreating back into the dark world while leaving all with a promise of impending doom.
“You may have won today, but I shall return with an even greater army, the likes that no mortal has ever seen, and on that day the demons will rise to power and rule over all Enterra!” Taivas hearing his promise, made a Promise of her own..."So be it Banir... and I shall wait within this man’s lineage for the day you return, I refuse to see the land the ancient gods worked so hard to create be destroyed by the likes of you. So come back Banir, however, we too shall be stronger. "
And so ended the Dark War, many perished and the land was ravaged. The people of Enterra where not without hope, they knew they could rebuilt and live a peaceful life. Their faith in the goddess helped them recover from the tragedy of war and any threats Banir posed. Taivas, blessed the world with a gift to show her pride for the inhabitants of the world, the gift was a seed that was planted in a great forest, she told the Elves to take care of it, for it would blossom into a great tree that would completely restore all life to Enterra. This tree would soon be known to all as Yggdrasill, the World Tree.
Soon after the battle, as quickly as they appeared, the Taivian race vanished into the sands of Iskandar, and with them the mighty hero and the goddess. Though some felt abandoned, the feeling of hope and their faith in Taivas didn’t waver. The people soon built churches and knighthoods based on praising and fighting for the Goddess herself. Life became somewhat normal again, the Kingdoms of Man and Eulinu soon thrived, While the Elves stayed inside the World forest, protecting the worlds blessing.
Time passed and the Dark war became History, and soon History became legend. After time many people forgot the threat posed by the Dark Throne, perhaps it was because even after over sixteen hundred years, no sign of the demon army has been seen. Some figured Banirs’ words were just that, words. Soon though, their ignorance would get the better of them, for this legend would soon become reality.
Now a young guard for the nation of Solace must take up arms and investigate the reasons of an ex-allied nation’s hostile actions against Solace and the neighboring country of Almira. He is accompanied by a Priestess and Engineer from Solace. Kenneth Rhodes and his scouting party must travel the world gathering allies for a war against the Rogue country of Niffilhiem, having no idea that their journey would not only lead them all over the world, but through the skies themselves.
Character’s based on what I’ve reviled:
Name: Kenneth Rhodes Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Human Occupation: Caravan Guard Class: Soldier Weapon: Swords Armor type: Medium
about: Kenneth was orphaned at a young age, originally left on the steps of an orphanage in Iskandar, he was moved to the orphanage in Solace after a heat wave threatened the town he was in. There, he grew with a two local boys that soon became his adoptive brothers, one day during a monster raid, one of the brothers was killed by a falling wall. Kenneth and his remaining friend where grief stricken, it took them nearly a year and when they came over their sorrows, the two vowed to do their best in making sure families and children wouldn’t have to suffer like they did. When both came of age, they signed up for guard duty and defended the kingdom of Solace from thieves and monster raids.
Personality: Kenneth is a kind hearted spirit who believes in his comrades. He’ll give it his all when something important is on the line and will never go down in a fight unless killed or rendered unconscious, making his a shining example of humanity’s will to survive. He would never harm anything unless it posed a threat to peace. His ultimate goal is to achieve peace by defeating any who pose to threaten it.
about: Aryana was born to Raina Harper, one of Solaces top royal advisors and a head Priestess in the Taivian sisterhood. She always admired her mother and strived to be just like her, like many kids normally do with their parents. Her father was never part of her life, when mentioned; Raina simply told Aryana that her father was a brave knight that fell during a monster attack. Aryana spent most of her days studying and learning about the holy magic arts. She practiced mastering both offensive and defensive abilities in order to become a great priestess like her mother. Now older, Raina expects more from her daughter, which makes it hard for Aryana to leave the castle at all.
Personality: Aryana is normally shy around others, rather having her head in a book than anything else. She worries about becoming strong and brilliant like her mother, so she strives to do her best in every situation. She is an excellent example of humanity’s thirst for knowledge. Her ultimate goal is to take her mother’s place as Head priestess and Advisor to the King on Solace.
Name: Aaron Wolfwood Age: 18 Gender: Male Race: Human Occupation: Engineer Class: Gunner Weapon: Guns Armor type: Medium
about: Aaron grew up in the city of Vertiline in the Almira Region. There he had a natural born talent to build and design machines, his house would eventually become fully automated, which caused his mother and father much grief. At the age of ten his parents had enough and sent Aaron to a prestigious school in Aquilla in the Solace region. There he was a subpar student, normally because he was always busy day dreaming about going on adventures like the knights he saw boarding ships to other lands would. Even with his lacking grades, his instructors saw potential in him and he was admitted to the Solan engineering society after his graduation. There, he and several colleges managed to create a weapon that made the bow and arrow out of date, they named it after the leader of the project and his mentor, Jason Gunts.
Personality: Aaron is very relaxed, often daydreaming of things besides his school work, which comes naturally to him. The best way to describe Aaron would be a laid back prodigy. Aaron wishes to see the world and learn other societies traditions, perhaps the scholar coming out in him, or perhaps just the need to escape his current lifestyle. Aaron is a prime subject when looking at humanities ability to become more advance and grow.
((EDIT for some reason it only copied one bio instead of everything.))
This post has been edited by Kennori: May 11 2012, 11:30 AM