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Sparrowsmith
post Apr 30 2012, 07:25 AM
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The closest thing we have to a plot synopsis can be found here: http://www.rpgrevolution.com/forums/index....st&p=557072
but there is still a lot of work to do.

Mainly, we need to work out some characters. Who are they and, more importantly, how do they behave/develop?

We have a few character outlines:
-The 'main' protagonist. The first one to log off the game/one who returns to his original body in layer 3
-The fighter. One of the two members of the group who does not own the game. He is an adept martial artist of some kind and spends his introduction robbing a warehouse for a copy of the game and then saving the 'main' protagonist from a group of monsters.
-The fighter's accomplice. An unwitting ally. Also doesn't have the game.
-The programmer that shoots the Rogue Program
-The programmer that contacts Matryoska (spell fail) might be the same programmer as above
-The Rogue Program (quite developed, but still a little weak in characterization)

We need to develop these, and make some more, then develop them as characters. I'd rather not have us submitting characters, but trying to work out how these people should act according to their situation.
Let's get these characters worked out, nice and logical like. Also, any additional plot points. We gotta work them out too.

We're kind of slowing down here, let's not have that.


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post Sep 6 2012, 04:18 AM
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The only problem is that layer 1 was never very real at all, but I agree we could do something to keep it alive.
I guess layer 1 becomes 'real' once layer 2 is damaged. If a L2 character says "remember the time we stormed that castle in the haunted forests? If we did that we can do this." then right in saying that they actually did that. It doesn't matter that it was a game because it turns out their whole life has been virtual anyway.
I also still think it would help if a character from L2 was something of a roleplayer. Their way of coping with the whole thing is basically to buy into it completely and just pretend they're doing a quest. It's kind of sad, brings in a L1 character, and it can be funny too.

The three-layered boss sounds good in theory, but it would have to be spread out across three different engines.
Okay, so lets say once the L2 characters are in L3's security systems, they find out the Rogue Program is backing himself up into a locked off version of L1, sort of like he did originally, but this time it's more serious because he'd be able to destroy all the backups. So a few L2 characters journey into L1 to kill him there. Meanwhile the other L2 characters try to lock off any progression the Rogue Program might make from where they are, and also they try to make the turrets stop firing at L3 characters. Eventually the L2 characters find the rogue program and attack it, but it escapes into the robot. Then in L3 they have the final confrontation with the robot (this could theoretically be the toughest battle of them all, because no one in L3 has real combat experience).
The confrontation ends with the L2 characters figuring out how to use the turrets, activating one, and firing upon the Rogue Program as it tries to leave the lab.

Is that multi-layered enough? thumbsup.gif


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- Sparrowsmith   Plot   Apr 30 2012, 07:25 AM
- - shinyjiggly   I'd like to take a crack at the fighter's ...   Apr 30 2012, 02:43 PM
- - bulmabriefs144   Let's see... There should also be: - Several...   Apr 30 2012, 08:15 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   QUOTE (shinyjiggly @ Apr 30 2012, 11:43 P...   May 1 2012, 02:28 PM
- - bulmabriefs144   Sounds fun. What about the main/backup party? I j...   May 1 2012, 07:19 PM
- - Kaust   QUOTE (bulmabriefs144 @ May 1 2012, 05:15...   May 1 2012, 07:56 PM
|- - thatbennyguy   QUOTE (Kaust @ May 2 2012, 03:56 PM) 1)Th...   May 1 2012, 08:39 PM
|- - bulmabriefs144   QUOTE (Kaust @ May 1 2012, 08:56 PM) QUOT...   May 2 2012, 01:02 PM
|- - Jens of Zanicuud   QUOTE We need to develop these, and make some more...   May 5 2012, 06:44 AM
|- - Sparrowsmith   QUOTE (Jens of Zanicuud @ May 5 2012, 03...   May 5 2012, 09:20 AM
- - shinyjiggly   Well, what if it works like the way online multipl...   May 1 2012, 09:11 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   QUOTE (thatbennyguy @ May 2 2012, 05:39 A...   May 2 2012, 06:45 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Any programmer I made based on myself makes stuff ...   May 6 2012, 05:46 PM
- - shinyjiggly   For programmer's actions in battle, I was thin...   May 6 2012, 11:03 PM
|- - ShanattoGunner   I thnk in battle each programer sponsor a hero and...   May 9 2012, 02:23 PM
- - MEands   Isn't that already what's happening on the...   May 10 2012, 07:13 PM
- - shinyjiggly   It's a little bit different than that. With l...   May 11 2012, 12:13 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   We do have to be careful with how much power the p...   May 11 2012, 12:15 AM
|- - ShanattoGunner   QUOTE (Sparrowsmith @ May 11 2012, 12:15 ...   May 11 2012, 11:09 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   Yeah, something along those.lines.   May 12 2012, 02:09 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Yeah, it would be interesting to have most of the ...   May 15 2012, 09:52 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   I was thinking we could have a 'coding' sc...   May 15 2012, 10:31 AM
- - Kaust   Some variant of this http://www.rpgrevolution.com/...   May 15 2012, 10:42 AM
- - MEands   We could do something along the lines of you playi...   May 15 2012, 03:25 PM
- - thatbennyguy   The game mechanic of typing codes for various atta...   May 15 2012, 03:33 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   If that's too ambitious, we can always have a ...   May 16 2012, 05:37 AM
- - MEands   Hey I'm reviving this thread because there...   Aug 26 2012, 02:23 PM
- - bulmabriefs144   Never do timing puzzles. Certain people (me) will ...   Aug 26 2012, 06:28 PM
- - MEands   Oh yeah I get what you're saying. We don't...   Aug 26 2012, 09:45 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   I'd definitely like to have some very complex ...   Aug 27 2012, 04:55 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Yes, this is what I was getting at. In my current ...   Aug 27 2012, 05:35 AM
- - MEands   Oh yeah, that's really good. Having multiple w...   Aug 27 2012, 04:00 PM
|- - bulmabriefs144   QUOTE (MEands @ Aug 27 2012, 04:00 PM) Oh...   Aug 28 2012, 05:06 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   QUOTE (bulmabriefs144 @ Aug 28 2012, 02:0...   Aug 28 2012, 07:58 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Probably Darwin ("progress" motif). Or P...   Aug 28 2012, 12:47 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   Well his power would be limited to the facility. A...   Aug 29 2012, 03:49 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Sure, let's go with it. For this to really re...   Aug 29 2012, 09:11 AM
- - MEands   I'm like, super into making the blackout terri...   Aug 29 2012, 02:58 PM
- - bulmabriefs144   Because it's awesome. But, yea, it probably wo...   Aug 29 2012, 09:16 PM
- - MEands   I mean, I'm all for turrets, we just need a go...   Aug 29 2012, 09:33 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   QUOTE (MEands @ Aug 30 2012, 06:33 AM) I ...   Aug 30 2012, 05:07 AM
|- - bulmabriefs144   QUOTE (Sparrowsmith @ Aug 30 2012, 06:07 ...   Aug 30 2012, 07:23 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   well, it's all top secret, so Asimov's thr...   Aug 31 2012, 04:27 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Well, that is true, there may have been a few ...   Aug 31 2012, 04:53 AM
- - MEands   For the sake of the game, the turret's range i...   Sep 1 2012, 01:07 PM
- - bulmabriefs144   As a puzzle, how does this work? Do we have camera...   Sep 1 2012, 08:09 PM
- - Shaddowval   So. I just spent AGES reading up on all this, or m...   Sep 5 2012, 07:58 PM
|- - MEands   QUOTE (Sparrowsmith @ Sep 6 2012, 05:18 A...   Sep 6 2012, 03:51 PM
- - Shaddowval   That is pretty multii-layered ;lol; Here is my rea...   Sep 6 2012, 07:20 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   QUOTE As for the multi layered boss, it could be ...   Sep 6 2012, 07:33 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   That's not really how data works, existing on ...   Sep 7 2012, 10:17 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Well, yea, I was thinking either one lump party, o...   Sep 7 2012, 12:12 PM
|- - MEands   QUOTE (bulmabriefs144 @ Sep 7 2012, 01:12...   Sep 7 2012, 06:58 PM
- - bulmabriefs144   (Sorry I haven't posted, but I dunno what to a...   Sep 10 2012, 08:17 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   QUOTE (bulmabriefs144 @ Sep 10 2012, 05:1...   Sep 11 2012, 03:08 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   Mainly we should have a mainframe, and one room th...   Sep 11 2012, 01:26 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   I don't know about having those kind of traps....   Sep 27 2012, 06:05 AM
|- - bulmabriefs144   QUOTE (Sparrowsmith @ Sep 27 2012, 07:05 ...   Sep 30 2012, 07:57 PM
- - MEands   Yeah. Perhaps it has a tile floor where certain ti...   Sep 27 2012, 04:02 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   There could also be pressure traps. Rooms with hig...   Sep 28 2012, 06:58 AM
- - Sparrowsmith   The problem is practicality. To be sufficiently th...   Oct 2 2012, 07:26 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   I'd like something that chases you and you hav...   Oct 2 2012, 04:56 PM
- - Sparrowsmith   I see. What if the corridor is lined with plates ...   Oct 3 2012, 02:39 AM
- - bulmabriefs144   That's sounds okay. Although the first one sho...   Oct 3 2012, 01:23 PM


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