Circus Tileset (RMXP), Critique only Options

[amanda2324]

Good day,

I spent a number of hours trying to make a Circus tileset because I wanted one for my game. I have only made the tents, however, while everything else is from other RMXP default tilesets, like Grassland, Castle Town, Farm Village. For the front roof tile and the wall tiles, I used the one little tent stand thing from the Castle Town sileset as a reference. Otherwise, the sides of the roof, the corner things, and so forth, are completely custom made. I gained inspiration for how the pieces are set up from the houses in the Castle Town tileset.

So, finally, here it is! (This is for Critique only, not for use!)

[Show/Hide] Circus Tileset

I wasn't sure what other things I could have included in a Circus tileset... I've never been to a Circus before. Probably cages for animals. But most other things I think would have to be set up as events, like the animals and the circus performers and so on.

I'll eventually have to make an Interior, one for "Backstage" and one for "the ring" I suppose. I'll keep thinking on it!

Best Regards,
Amanda

This post has been edited by amanda2324: Apr 28 2012, 02:00 PM

[amanda2324]

Do they look better now?

i guess, in the example it looks appropriate

maybe if the tent had some rope and tied to a wooden stick that would look more like a tent?

make plenty of colourful things, that should looks more like circus

Hm... I'm not sure where I could apply the rope and wooden stick whatnot. Should I make one for the sides and the corners, as well as the front somehow? I'll have to play around with it, I suppose.

Maybe put barrels in various colors? And of course, there's balls... not sure what else to add. Just different colors for the stands? I only have red right now, as shown in the screen shot.

But... does anyone know an easier way to align the tilesets props? I probably edited the Circus Tileset at least 20 times trying to readjust it and everything...