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The Unknown
Abstract- A young boy becomes a hero without wanting to. He is giving a sphere from a strange creature called a Zika.
Genre- Fantasy
Platform- RMXP
Story A young boy named Joshua Willword is given a powerful object called The Sphere he doesn't know why the Zika choose him or what on earth a Zika is but now he has to fight shadows and go into their world. Joined by a few people he goes on the adventure of his life.
Setting Humans and elfs lived together until the shadows started appearing everywhere. The shadows have power and took over earth. So the humans quickly left that world behind and used all the mages to transport them to a new world which they named "Sarida"
Characters
Characters
Name: Joshua Willword
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Class: Fighter
Joshua Willword was just a normal kid who's father beat him. He can see Shadows and hear and feel things others can't. He is one of the lucky humans who can enter The Shadow World without getting injured. But why?
Name: Ann Hinklebutton
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Class: Cleric
Ann Hinklebutton is a young girl who can see shadows. She has trouble entering The Shadow World but she can enter it. She knows a lot about The Sphere and Shadows. She slowy tells Joshua the imfomation when he needs it.
Name: Lisanna Lazsam
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Class: Mage
Lisanna Lazsam is a young mage who's magic is very impressive. She learned magic at a young age and is very skilled at using it. She's absent minded and always shows off her magic to others. She is also in a constant battle with "them"
Name: Zahatchi
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Class: Dark Mage
Zahatchi is always follow by shadows but claims he isn't one of them and he'll never be one. He has a short temper and will do anything to get The Sphere.
Credits
Credits
By Ccoa: UMS, Heal On Level Up
By Moghunter: Item Limit, Adv Load Bar, Scene Shop, Scene GameOver, Scene End, Scene Equip, Scene Item, Scene Menu, Scene Skill, Scene Status
Features: Rice Field Battle System, Facesets, side quests
Known Errors: Sometimes your chararter will not change graphic so he sometimes is not invisible when he should be. A random name will sometimes appear when you get an item.
Skills for the main chararters:
Joshua's Skills
Lev. 3: Sword Swing
Lev. 6: Fire
Lev. 9: Feint Attack
Lev. 25: Spiral Blade
Ann's Skills
Lev. 1: Heal
Lev. 5: Remedy
Lev. 6: Wind or Water (You choose)
Lev. 9: Barrier
Lev. 13: Greater Heal
Lev. 17: Sharp
Lev. 21: Greater Remedy
Lev. 25: Rise
Lev. 29: Mass Heal
Lisanna's Skills
Lev 1: Ice
Lev. 5: Mass Dazzle
Lev. 9: Mass Weaken
Lev. 13: Greater Ice
Lev. 17: Mass Feeble
Lev. 21: Mass Mute
Lev. 25: Mass Sleep
Lev. 29: Mass Thunder
What shadows are
About the Shadows
Shadows are creatures of darkness who feed off of humans. They came from the darkness of the world. If someone enters their world the Shadows try and kill them as fast as possible. They kill them by the darkness in the air of the Shadow World. Humans can't enter the shadow world without getting hurt.
This post has been edited by Fishyguyguy: Mar 29 2012, 09:27 AM
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The story sounds very generic. Plus it's a bit hard to take in with only 2 sentences, one of which runs on without punctuation. The fact that your characters are all age 13 and under seems a bit odd, even for standard rpg's; and of course there is the typical swordsman whose age is unknown.
Based on this, it just feels like a hundred of other games I've played and passed up throughout the years. However, I will give you props for the mapping, which is actually pretty decent in a simplistic sort of way.
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The Unknown, A powerful object called The Sphere is given to a boy.
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