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Jan 15 2012, 06:53 AM
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Jan 26 2012, 06:58 AM
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That's a cool sword; it's a little large for an icon though, so is it supposed to be used as the actual item when you look at the item's description in the game menu?
No, it's only a test, just to train.
Thanks, however the comment
I added a shadow to the hilt, as it is out here:
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kaz Critique Thread Jan 15 2012, 06:53 AM MrGuy0250 Guess I'll be the first to post a resource :3
... Jan 17 2012, 12:10 PM Jens of Zanicuud I cannot access your resource...
A site (soundclou... Jan 17 2012, 01:10 PM MrGuy0250 Oopsie, link fixed. Could have sworn I wasn't ... Jan 17 2012, 01:36 PM Jens of Zanicuud In my opinion, this music is good enough, but is m... Jan 18 2012, 04:54 AM Tohsaka @MrGuy0250: Sounds really nice- I see it for more ... Jan 21 2012, 04:29 PM X-M-O If this image is for a game, it belongs in the Scr... Jan 21 2012, 04:43 PM Tohsaka QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 21 2012, 07... Jan 22 2012, 07:52 AM Saul95 RE: Critique Thread Jan 22 2012, 11:21 AM SloaTheDemon hey guys i made a new song for Asylum. If u've... Jan 23 2012, 02:28 PM X-M-O QUOTE (Tohsaka @ Jan 22 2012, 09:52 AM) I... Jan 23 2012, 03:11 PM SloaTheDemon glad to hear stuff like that XMO, and i will defin... Jan 23 2012, 07:09 PM X-M-O I certainly encourage you to continue experimentin... Jan 23 2012, 07:59 PM Ndoelicious But what if I'm using any FF music backgrounds... Jan 24 2012, 06:42 PM X-M-O I'm sorry, are you asking a question in relati... Jan 24 2012, 06:51 PM Ndoelicious QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 24 2012, 07... Jan 24 2012, 07:12 PM X-M-O Well, you should always credit the source of anyth... Jan 24 2012, 07:45 PM Ndoelicious QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 24 2012, 08... Jan 25 2012, 11:53 AM X-M-O Well, you could include just one image in your gal... Jan 26 2012, 12:38 AM Ndoelicious QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 26 2012, 01... Jan 26 2012, 02:05 PM X-M-O Editing without a tablet isn't always difficul... Jan 27 2012, 10:30 AM Ndoelicious QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 27 2012, 11... Jan 27 2012, 11:42 AM X-M-O Yeah, that's the way to go because then you co... Jan 27 2012, 12:16 PM Ndoelicious Yeah, but still, we need to edit them before we... Jan 27 2012, 12:40 PM X-M-O Yes, you should credit whoever you get the origina... Jan 27 2012, 12:52 PM SloaTheDemon hey guys, im back again with a new song. Just like... Jan 30 2012, 03:24 PM Gananr I need your perspective on this battler..
I made i... Feb 1 2012, 07:52 AM MissCoriel http://soundcloud.com/evilpickle-music-dept/the-wa... Feb 4 2012, 11:45 PM Adrien. So this is not a resource but what ever, were mixi... Feb 5 2012, 11:13 PM Saul95 Can i post screens here right?
Btw, new screen of ... Feb 6 2012, 01:43 PM se7en QUOTE (Saul95 @ Feb 6 2012, 01:43 PM) Can... Feb 6 2012, 03:46 PM Ndoelicious QUOTE (Saul95 @ Feb 6 2012, 02:43 PM) Can... Feb 6 2012, 05:47 PM supercow @gananr : i think it has potential , give it some ... Feb 6 2012, 04:56 PM Saul95 Thanks to all for comments
Lately I'm working... Feb 11 2012, 11:30 AM kayden997 @Saul95
Wow *blink blink*... Wow! That is real... Feb 11 2012, 11:41 AM CWCprime @Saul95: That map is really good. XP graphics are ... Feb 12 2012, 09:48 AM supercow @CWCprime : i think you need to think more of your... Feb 12 2012, 10:26 AM Sinchross Wow, very good trailer obsorber!!
Some p... Feb 15 2012, 07:45 PM -dah0rst- Woah, looks amazing- but i guess does aren't t... Feb 16 2012, 11:31 AM kayden997 @-dah0rst-
Scripted by yourself? Man! I wish I... Feb 16 2012, 12:15 PM Sinchross @-dah0rst->> WOW
The effect only works w... Feb 16 2012, 12:40 PM -dah0rst- Which effect do exactly mean?
Maybe I'll post ... Feb 16 2012, 02:43 PM Zinx_therpgmaker Looking pretty nice, -dah0rst-.
I was wondering w... Feb 16 2012, 03:28 PM X-M-O You guys really need to start crediting these reso... Feb 16 2012, 03:31 PM Saul95 But wait, you could not leave the topic open and t... Feb 16 2012, 10:29 PM -dah0rst- @Zinx
I have one big problem with this map- if so... Feb 17 2012, 12:12 AM Vexus I'm doing some custom icons for my game and wo... Feb 17 2012, 02:02 AM Jens of Zanicuud Uhm... they're all really good except the last... Feb 17 2012, 02:33 AM Vexus Yea... last one will probably be changed I'll ... Feb 17 2012, 02:55 AM Oceans Dream @zinx:
Try using a door from here or something. ... Feb 17 2012, 03:51 AM Zinx_therpgmaker @-dah0rst- and OceansDream
Is this better?
Also,... Feb 17 2012, 01:33 PM -dah0rst- Don't make the room that big. This shopkeeper ... Feb 17 2012, 02:14 PM Zinx_therpgmaker Is this any better? Feb 17 2012, 04:22 PM Vexus Your shop is very empty.
Seeing your tileset, you... Feb 19 2012, 03:31 AM Sinchross I Agree with vexus and think that you do something... Feb 20 2012, 12:48 PM Kaimi @Zinx_therpgmaker: first: you should make the inte... Feb 23 2012, 12:24 PM X-M-O I've noticed that even after posting the rules... Feb 23 2012, 06:33 PM AbsoluteIce What do you guys think about this logo
I made? Feb 25 2012, 08:29 AM akura My Beanies :3 You can use them for VX : D Feb 25 2012, 08:43 AM kayden997 BEANS!!!!!! Feb 25 2012, 08:53 AM akura QUOTE (kayden997 @ Feb 25 2012, 09:53 AM)... Feb 25 2012, 09:57 AM Jens of Zanicuud Hi everyone, I need a feedback on this BGM.
Is it ... Feb 29 2012, 01:03 PM Yuu-Mon Musuedo QUOTE (Jens of Zanicuud @ Feb 29 2012, 01... Feb 29 2012, 08:41 PM Jens of Zanicuud QUOTE (Yuu-Mon Musuedo @ Mar 1 2012, 05... Mar 2 2012, 06:43 AM -dah0rst- A new screenshot from my bumpmap script- I tried i... Mar 1 2012, 12:58 AM Yuu-Mon Musuedo I need some feedback on the character's portra... Mar 4 2012, 08:24 AM MrGuy0250 Hello people, I'd like some feedback on a piec... Mar 3 2012, 02:21 PM akura I give you my Dark Mage Beanie :3 Mar 3 2012, 03:00 PM Holder Progress on an animated battler request:
(Magic c... Mar 3 2012, 03:27 PM akura QUOTE (Holder @ Mar 3 2012, 04:27 PM) Pro... Mar 3 2012, 03:51 PM Resource Dragon I've got a little screenie of some tilesets I ... Mar 3 2012, 04:54 PM supercow @resource dragon: nice , looks really like zelda... Mar 3 2012, 11:39 PM akura Heres a more detailed town i'm doing ^^
*Igno... Mar 4 2012, 10:53 AM supercow @yuu-mon-musuedo : yeah, the hair looks weird ... Mar 4 2012, 05:45 PM kayden997 @akura
It's quite confusing at the moment tbh.... Mar 7 2012, 01:33 AM akura QUOTE (kayden997 @ Mar 7 2012, 02:33 AM) ... Mar 7 2012, 01:35 PM kayden997 The boots seem off too me Mar 8 2012, 01:09 AM AbsoluteIce Thoughts on this Kaduki battler?
I made the clothe... Mar 17 2012, 08:09 PM Resource Dragon Not bad, I like the cartoon like style.
Failed at... Mar 17 2012, 10:04 PM Iori_yagami What do you guys think about this:
I tried a bit ... Mar 20 2012, 07:30 AM supercow @resource dragon : it looks very good , i dont ... Mar 20 2012, 12:36 PM akura [Show/Hide] Proof
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... Mar 22 2012, 01:01 PM Tohsaka akura, you've got that formatted well for a pl... Mar 23 2012, 03:06 PM akura QUOTE (Tohsaka @ Mar 23 2012, 04:06 PM) a... Mar 23 2012, 04:21 PM Saul95 New screen Mar 25 2012, 10:29 AM kayden997 @Saul95 Whoa! Look beautiful! I love the i... Mar 26 2012, 02:03 AM akura QUOTE (kayden997 @ Mar 26 2012, 03:03 AM)... Mar 26 2012, 07:59 AM supercow @saul95 :looks good , but it could be better if ... Mar 26 2012, 03:09 AM Yuu-Mon Musuedo I'm feeling a bit gutsy today so I did a quick... Apr 10 2012, 04:08 PM Iori_yagami Hello party people! Ima back!(after a long... Apr 22 2012, 04:46 AM Holder @Yuu-Mon Musuedo
Very nice, looks like there... Apr 22 2012, 11:33 AM mooshra Hey this is my first time in the forums here so co... May 28 2012, 06:46 PM Retrograve Hello this is my first time posting on this site a... Jun 1 2012, 04:25 PM mooshra Nice bust I have checked your latest ones and wow... Jun 4 2012, 01:08 PM Holder 3x Idle > 1x Attack
Remake of Dollmages Meliadu... Jun 4 2012, 01:20 PM kayden997 For the attack, maybe more movement in the hair or... Jun 4 2012, 01:47 PM Holder Cheers for the input. I tried the hair a few times... Jun 4 2012, 02:05 PM mooshra here is the first row a walking sprite for Holder... Jun 18 2012, 05:53 AM
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