Abstract- When Kaeri is set extremely off-balance and its structure is on its limit and about to collapse, Cookie Doku must hurry through her world to find six crystal tears that will restore peace. Genre- Fantasy RPG Platform- RPG Maker XP
Story In a faraway planet from a different galaxy... Sacred items known as the Crystal Tears are being stolen and destroyed, throwing off Kaeri's balance! The days and nights don't follow each other anymore, the weather is completely reversed and the three different layers of the planet, all containing many forms of life, threaten to collapse and destroy the world! Inside her castle, safely, the one that began all this laughs. All that they hope is that the awful, egocentrical maniac and her stupid friend don't even dare to make their move... Fortunately for all, that's not what Cookie Doku, the soon-to-be-queen of Kaeri, plans on doing! As soon as the first tremors start and she is mistakenly expelled from her own castle, she drags her best friend Miky Miyokie and the two go off to restore the balance. But, without their power in full, it will be a difficult quest, against the most powerful enemy they could ever face.. Will they succeed, or fail?!
Kaeri is the mystical world where it is said that the two queens of the Universe live. It is a very complex world, with eight countries, and three different layers: The Overworld: Home to the Angels and spirits of light, it is up in the clouds directly above the Underworld. It has three countries: Meryd: Country of Water, and home to Princess Cappuccino. Known for its constant freezing. Most of the beings that live there are water-adapted ones, like Mermaids, as the princess herself. Bris: Country of Wind, land of Princess Mya. Composed of mainly high peaks of hills, it leads directly to Lumine. Flying creatures make this country their home- it is also known for its vast population of elves. Lumine: Country of Light, where Princess Shiro lives. It's a vast chain of floating mountains, covered entirely of snow, at all times. Few creatures live here, due to the harsh conditions. The Spiral Staircase of this country leads to Bris. Besides the three countries, the Heavens are also located here. They're where Hikari Priestess Academy is located, and where light souls go after their death to become Angels.
The Underworld: Home to the Succubus and dark spirits, it's the widest, yet thinner, layer. Underneath it are the Cores. It has three countries: Thorne: Country of Earth, belongs to Princess Ami. It has deep forests and wide jungles, where nature sprouts like nowhere else in Kaeri. It is home to all kinds of creatures, except flying ones. Flemme: Country of Fire, like its Princess, the fiery Glow. Known for its seas of lava, deep volcanoes, hot weather and its vast desert, many kinds of beings come here, some even attracted by the Princess herself. Leads directly to Obsur. Obsur: Country of Darkness, ruled by Princess Kuro. It is, like Lumine, a wide chain of floating mountains, yet these of Obsur are thawed at all times. It is mostly deserted, with the exception of the castle town. Its Spiral Staircase leads to Flemme. In addition to the three countries, Succuris is also located in the Underworld. It is the main living place of Succubus and it is where dark souls go after their death.
The Cores: The innermost layer of Kaeri, it belongs entirely to the two queens. There are no wild monsters in these mystical worlds, only the castle people and the castle town. It has two countries: Mizuyari: Core of Light, belongs to the Queen of Light, Cookie Doku. It's a lush place filled with forests and also high peaks. It has a small sea and a very nice beach, all created by queen Cookie. Aiyari: Core of Dark, of the Queen of Darkness, Miky Miyokie. Though it may sound a bit glum, queen Miky checked that it would be as beautiful as possible herself. Aiyari is made of vast plains always blooming, and its castle town is called the 'City of Love'.
COOKIE DOKU: AGE: 18 CLASS: Warrior PRIMARY WEAPON: Sword SECONDARY WEAPON: Dagger HISTORY: Cookie grew up as an ordinary human, but since the first day of her life she had an insatiable curiosty and a strong will to be different from everyone else. One of her closest friends died when she was 14, and since that day she's blamed herself for it. She has her personal reasons, but Miky doesn't approve of them. She's the follower to Alice's reign of terror Kaeri, which means she is the High Princess of Light. Her deities are Mya Hittori, Cappu Crème and Shiro Itsumada. PERSONALITY: Cookie is a crazy girl. She likes to sell herself as strong and fearless, but she cries a lot for the weirdest reasons, and she can't sleep fine when there's no light. However, there's no doubt she's wise, strong and kind when she situation calls for, but due to terrible experiences in her past, she can also be cold and cruel. Rumours say that once, Cookie killed six people that she hated, but she says it's a lie. Usually she is very easy to befriend, and likes to annoy her best friends. She is very protective of Miky.
MIKY MIYOKIE: AGE: 18 CLASS: Witch PRIMARY WEAPON: Wand SECONDARY WEAPON: Bow HISTORY: Miky shares almost her whole past with Cookie, since the two have known each other since they were three years old. She also suffered a lot from the loss of one of her closest friends (who was also very good friends with Cookie), but unlike Cookie, she doesn't blame herself or Cookie for it, even though she knows the good reasons Cookie blames herself for. She's Anne's successor, and the High Princess of Darkness. Her deities are Glow Prettyshine, Ami Goldheart and Kuro Itsumada. PERSONALITY: Miky is stubborn, weird and rash. Though not as courageous as her best friend, she too often steps up when she needs to. Miky has a lot more sense of reality than Cookie, and due to being a magic user, she's very smart. However, she's great at messing up things and forgetting stuff, which makes her stubborn more of a fault than a virtue. Unlike Cookie, she can't remember the horrible things they went through as clearly, so she is a lot less cruel, but sometimes she can really hurt the people around her, even if she doesn't notice it. She protects Cookie whenever such is needed, but she likes to pick on her. A lot.
[some old guy that has a spear as weapon. Dunno name yet]
Luc Ekite: Age: 25 Gender: Male Personality: A little snotty, yet very intelligent. He's very annoyable, and quite restless. However, Luc is very knowledgeable, and he always has a few words of wisdom to share. (That is, when nobody tells him to shut up.) Biography: Luc is one of the descendants of Myso, however, during the millenia, the lineage of the Ekite changed from Elves to Humans. Luc lives in Obsur's castle town where he studies the primary energy form of Kaeri.
Ta'nya: Age: 27 Gender: Female Personality: Outgoing and extremely smart, Ta'nya is the tactical element this party lacks much. She has a fiery spirit and is always willing to go on an adventure. Biography: She lives in Kasit, the desert town of Flemme, and is very experienced in fighting, as she is the Champion of the Flemme Battle Tournament. Rumors say she defeated Princess Glow in her dragon form, although she doesn't say anything about it.
[DUN DUN DUUUN TWO MYSTERY CHARACTERS ;D]
Credits Minkoff for Minkoff Battle Script DerVVulfman for Enhanced Script Leifthrasir for Title Screen Music
EDIT 15.11.2011: Updated last screenie; Added Ami's character art EDIT 16.11.2011: Added Shiro's character art EDIT 21.11.2011: Added info about Ta'nya; Changed banner; Changed Cookie's official art EDIT 09.07.2012: Changed logo, removed unused characters, updated Cookie and Miky's descriptions, updated story.
This post has been edited by Dragoncookie: Nov 25 2012, 05:33 AM
RM Skill: Skilled
QUOTE (Sanctity @ Nov 25 2011, 12:15 PM)
Why are you conforming to what others want of your art? It's YOUR art. They should be giving creative criticism, not just saying "I Don't Like." All your art styles look fine. Use the one you like best. Oh, and why does anime have to be realistic? It's frickin' art, not photography. You don't need to conform to proportional art.
Agreed. Unless it's pointers in anatomy(and the point of the style isn't the exaggeration of anatomy)You should go with a style that you like. If you try to conform to whatever everyone else likes, you might find your love of artin' decreasing. And you'll also find you'll never make everyone happy. Some people don't like anime, some don't like realism, some don't like pixel, etc etc etc. You'll also find you'll take longer(possibly never get your game done) if you don't settle and pick a style.
Now if it's YOUR choice to change styles and edit or modify then go for it (Heaven knows I've changed my game's art style at least three times over the course of five years; but that's because I've changed as an artist. I can go back to any style I want whether it's anime, realism or some hybrid of the two or my own totally unique style.)
I like all your styles, they defo have your own touch and style to them that is your own.