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Dragoncookie
post Nov 14 2011, 08:05 AM
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Abstract- When Kaeri is set extremely off-balance and its structure is on its limit and about to collapse, Cookie Doku must hurry through her world to find six crystal tears that will restore peace.
Genre- Fantasy RPG
Platform- RPG Maker XP


Story
In a faraway planet from a different galaxy...
Sacred items known as the Crystal Tears are being stolen and destroyed, throwing off Kaeri's balance! The days and nights don't follow each other anymore, the weather is completely reversed and the three different layers of the planet, all containing many forms of life, threaten to collapse and destroy the world!
Inside her castle, safely, the one that began all this laughs. All that they hope is that the awful, egocentrical maniac and her stupid friend don't even dare to make their move...
Fortunately for all, that's not what Cookie Doku, the soon-to-be-queen of Kaeri, plans on doing! As soon as the first tremors start and she is mistakenly expelled from her own castle, she drags her best friend Miky Miyokie and the two go off to restore the balance.
But, without their power in full, it will be a difficult quest, against the most powerful enemy they could ever face..
Will they succeed, or fail?!

Setting
Settings
Kaeri is the mystical world where it is said that the two queens of the Universe live. It is a very complex world, with eight countries, and three different layers:
The Overworld: Home to the Angels and spirits of light, it is up in the clouds directly above the Underworld. It has three countries:
Meryd: Country of Water, and home to Princess Cappuccino. Known for its constant freezing. Most of the beings that live there are water-adapted ones, like Mermaids, as the princess herself.
Bris: Country of Wind, land of Princess Mya. Composed of mainly high peaks of hills, it leads directly to Lumine. Flying creatures make this country their home- it is also known for its vast population of elves.
Lumine: Country of Light, where Princess Shiro lives. It's a vast chain of floating mountains, covered entirely of snow, at all times. Few creatures live here, due to the harsh conditions. The Spiral Staircase of this country leads to Bris.
Besides the three countries, the Heavens are also located here. They're where Hikari Priestess Academy is located, and where light souls go after their death to become Angels.

The Underworld: Home to the Succubus and dark spirits, it's the widest, yet thinner, layer. Underneath it are the Cores. It has three countries:
Thorne: Country of Earth, belongs to Princess Ami. It has deep forests and wide jungles, where nature sprouts like nowhere else in Kaeri. It is home to all kinds of creatures, except flying ones.
Flemme: Country of Fire, like its Princess, the fiery Glow. Known for its seas of lava, deep volcanoes, hot weather and its vast desert, many kinds of beings come here, some even attracted by the Princess herself. Leads directly to Obsur.
Obsur: Country of Darkness, ruled by Princess Kuro. It is, like Lumine, a wide chain of floating mountains, yet these of Obsur are thawed at all times. It is mostly deserted, with the exception of the castle town. Its Spiral Staircase leads to Flemme.
In addition to the three countries, Succuris is also located in the Underworld. It is the main living place of Succubus and it is where dark souls go after their death.

The Cores: The innermost layer of Kaeri, it belongs entirely to the two queens. There are no wild monsters in these mystical worlds, only the castle people and the castle town. It has two countries:
Mizuyari: Core of Light, belongs to the Queen of Light, Cookie Doku. It's a lush place filled with forests and also high peaks. It has a small sea and a very nice beach, all created by queen Cookie.
Aiyari: Core of Dark, of the Queen of Darkness, Miky Miyokie. Though it may sound a bit glum, queen Miky checked that it would be as beautiful as possible herself. Aiyari is made of vast plains always blooming, and its castle town is called the 'City of Love'.


Characters
Chars
COOKIE DOKU:
AGE: 18
CLASS: Warrior
PRIMARY WEAPON: Sword
SECONDARY WEAPON: Dagger
HISTORY:
Cookie grew up as an ordinary human, but since the first day of her life she had an insatiable curiosty and a strong will to be different from everyone else.
One of her closest friends died when she was 14, and since that day she's blamed herself for it. She has her personal reasons, but Miky doesn't approve of them.
She's the follower to Alice's reign of terror Kaeri, which means she is the High Princess of Light.
Her deities are Mya Hittori, Cappu Crème and Shiro Itsumada.
PERSONALITY:
Cookie is a crazy girl. She likes to sell herself as strong and fearless, but she cries a lot for the weirdest reasons, and she can't sleep fine when there's no light.
However, there's no doubt she's wise, strong and kind when she situation calls for, but due to terrible experiences in her past, she can also be cold and cruel.
Rumours say that once, Cookie killed six people that she hated, but she says it's a lie.
Usually she is very easy to befriend, and likes to annoy her best friends.
She is very protective of Miky.

MIKY MIYOKIE:
AGE: 18
CLASS: Witch
PRIMARY WEAPON: Wand
SECONDARY WEAPON: Bow
HISTORY:
Miky shares almost her whole past with Cookie, since the two have known each other since they were three years old.
She also suffered a lot from the loss of one of her closest friends (who was also very good friends with Cookie), but unlike Cookie, she doesn't blame herself or Cookie for it, even though she knows the good reasons Cookie blames herself for.
She's Anne's successor, and the High Princess of Darkness.
Her deities are Glow Prettyshine, Ami Goldheart and Kuro Itsumada.
PERSONALITY:
Miky is stubborn, weird and rash. Though not as courageous as her best friend, she too often steps up when she needs to. Miky has a lot more sense of reality than Cookie, and due to being a magic user, she's very smart. However, she's great at messing up things and forgetting stuff, which makes her stubborn more of a fault than a virtue. Unlike Cookie, she can't remember the horrible things they went through as clearly, so she is a lot less cruel, but sometimes she can really hurt the people around her, even if she doesn't notice it.
She protects Cookie whenever such is needed, but she likes to pick on her. A lot.

[Fuchsia Elfynnia]

[some old guy that has a spear as weapon. Dunno name yet]

Luc Ekite:
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Personality: A little snotty, yet very intelligent. He's very annoyable, and quite restless. However, Luc is very knowledgeable, and he always has a few words of wisdom to share. (That is, when nobody tells him to shut up.)
Biography: Luc is one of the descendants of Myso, however, during the millenia, the lineage of the Ekite changed from Elves to Humans. Luc lives in Obsur's castle town where he studies the primary energy form of Kaeri.

Ta'nya:
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Personality: Outgoing and extremely smart, Ta'nya is the tactical element this party lacks much. She has a fiery spirit and is always willing to go on an adventure.
Biography: She lives in Kasit, the desert town of Flemme, and is very experienced in fighting, as she is the Champion of the Flemme Battle Tournament. Rumors say she defeated Princess Glow in her dragon form, although she doesn't say anything about it.

[DUN DUN DUUUN TWO MYSTERY CHARACTERS ;D]


Credits
Minkoff for Minkoff Battle Script
DerVVulfman for Enhanced Script
Leifthrasir for Title Screen Music

Screenshots

Screenies

Title Screen:


Boss Cookie in her throne:


Features
Minkoff Battle System w/ Custom Battlers

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lame little cookie >3<

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lame little miky xD

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lame little fuchsia?


EDIT 15.11.2011: Updated last screenie; Added Ami's character art
EDIT 16.11.2011: Added Shiro's character art
EDIT 21.11.2011: Added info about Ta'nya; Changed banner; Changed Cookie's official art
EDIT 09.07.2012: Changed logo, removed unused characters, updated Cookie and Miky's descriptions, updated story.

This post has been edited by Dragoncookie: Nov 25 2012, 05:33 AM


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post Nov 14 2011, 11:48 AM
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Thank you for the advice! I'll update the maps tomorrow (haven't got any time today) and I'll upload some new screenies!


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- Dragoncookie   Crystal Tears   Nov 14 2011, 08:05 AM
- - Sailerius   The art is very cute, but your mapping needs work....   Nov 14 2011, 10:53 AM
- - supercow   the art is nice , the outer white look a bit ja...   Nov 14 2011, 01:40 PM
- - Guinevere   The art is like SOOO cute, and I FELL IN LOVE with...   Nov 14 2011, 03:38 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @supercow: thanks! the outlines look jagged be...   Nov 15 2011, 06:34 AM
- - Strawberry   You should download a free program like Paint.net ...   Nov 15 2011, 07:12 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Paint.NET... Working on it! Thank you sooo muc...   Nov 15 2011, 10:31 AM
- - Atoa   Make a favor to yourself: scrap this horrendous RM...   Nov 15 2011, 11:12 AM
- - amerk   Well, everybody has more or less stated my opinion...   Nov 15 2011, 11:18 AM
- - Dragoncookie   @Atoa: thanks for the advice! I'll be addi...   Nov 15 2011, 11:42 AM
- - amerk   I'm not sure if it works as well with XP as it...   Nov 15 2011, 12:12 PM
- - Sailerius   It's exactly the same in XP as in VX.   Nov 15 2011, 01:11 PM
- - Dragoncookie   You mean, hand-drawing them and setting them as th...   Nov 16 2011, 06:40 AM
|- - amerk   QUOTE (Dragoncookie @ Nov 16 2011, 08:40 ...   Nov 16 2011, 08:45 PM
- - Sailerius   Yup, that's exactly right. Looks cute! Lov...   Nov 16 2011, 11:05 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Thanks! I'll try to change the corners ic...   Nov 16 2011, 11:16 AM
- - Eden   I appreciate the storyline, it isn't original ...   Nov 16 2011, 03:42 PM
- - Guinevere   Yeah, I was going to comment on the similarity of ...   Nov 16 2011, 03:45 PM
- - Lie   The whimsical design is eye-pleasing, but it may n...   Nov 16 2011, 07:25 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @Eden: I get it. Different head shapes are a bit d...   Nov 17 2011, 06:34 AM
|- - Eden   QUOTE (Dragoncookie @ Nov 17 2011, 06:34 ...   Nov 17 2011, 08:09 PM
- - Lie   Well, your old art was standard anime, and not as ...   Nov 17 2011, 02:56 PM
- - Sanctity   Plotline: Good, but doesn't hook my interest. ...   Nov 17 2011, 06:45 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @Lie: Hmm I don't like it a lot. Maybe I'l...   Nov 19 2011, 01:09 AM
|- - Eden   QUOTE (Dragoncookie @ Nov 19 2011, 01:09 ...   Nov 19 2011, 10:13 PM
- - Saul95   Beautiful pixels. But I think you were wrong to dr...   Nov 19 2011, 04:49 AM
- - Dragoncookie   What do you mean?   Nov 19 2011, 04:58 AM
|- - Saul95   QUOTE (Dragoncookie @ Nov 19 2011, 04:58 ...   Nov 24 2011, 11:53 AM
- - supercow   nice very nice , the hand looks like it should ...   Nov 19 2011, 06:47 AM
- - Dragoncookie   @supercow: Thanks! Yes most likely it would xD...   Nov 20 2011, 08:20 AM
- - supercow   now that i take a look again, it doesnt have an ey...   Nov 20 2011, 02:33 PM
- - Zackwell   I have high standards when I'm looking at home...   Nov 21 2011, 03:03 AM
- - Dragoncookie   @supercow: Ohh eyebrows. xD I'll eventually ad...   Nov 21 2011, 06:43 AM
- - Dragoncookie   New art style! [Show/Hide] Clicky!   Nov 23 2011, 11:51 PM
- - Eden   I like it. Not as much as the pixely style, but a...   Nov 24 2011, 07:21 AM
- - Leifthrasir   I like the overall feel of this project, and I thi...   Nov 24 2011, 08:17 AM
- - Dragoncookie   @Eden: Thanks! Also, I won't be using thes...   Nov 24 2011, 09:05 AM
- - supercow   i really really like your art i hope i get to s...   Nov 24 2011, 10:00 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Thanks! I'm working on Ami's already...   Nov 24 2011, 11:01 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Hmm I see. I kinda have that problem but if I fatt...   Nov 24 2011, 12:03 PM
- - Sanctity   Why are you conforming to what others want of your...   Nov 25 2011, 12:15 PM
|- - Rydesk   QUOTE (Sanctity @ Nov 25 2011, 12:15 PM) ...   Dec 9 2011, 07:31 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Well, they didn't tell me they didn't like...   Nov 25 2011, 12:20 PM
- - Sanctity   I could argue (Pointlessly) with you about the las...   Nov 25 2011, 12:24 PM
- - Sakura Phoenix   QUOTE (Sanctity @ Nov 25 2011, 12:15 PM) ...   Nov 25 2011, 12:25 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @Sanctity:Hmm. If it's pointless, let's no...   Nov 25 2011, 12:29 PM
- - Sakura Phoenix   No problem ^^ Like I said, I agree with people he...   Nov 25 2011, 12:47 PM
- - Dragoncookie   Yes, it's really easy to slip up on anatomy, a...   Nov 25 2011, 01:30 PM
- - Saul95   Sanctity, I really appreciate the designs of drago...   Nov 26 2011, 05:21 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Does this sprite style fit the parallax mapping be...   Nov 27 2011, 11:37 AM
- - Saul95   Beautiful parallax map, perhaps the floor is a bit...   Nov 27 2011, 12:40 PM
- - supercow   i can say for sure that its cute the lighting s...   Nov 27 2011, 12:46 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @Saul95: Thanks! Yes this is only a test, I d...   Nov 27 2011, 11:42 PM
- - Sailerius   The main issue you have is that the outline style ...   Nov 28 2011, 11:36 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Well i'm trying to fix that, still, and I can ...   Nov 28 2011, 11:41 AM
- - Rydesk   Not sure if it's just me.. But the Title Scree...   Nov 30 2011, 01:05 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Aww... I really like it xD I'm not really gonn...   Nov 30 2011, 10:48 AM
- - MistarEvona   I love your new art style! Good luck.   Nov 30 2011, 10:18 PM
- - Eden   Not even a demo out and it's already getting a...   Nov 30 2011, 10:51 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @MistarEvona: Thanks!! ^^ @Eden: I know, ...   Dec 1 2011, 12:10 AM
- - Eden   It's lookin good, I think your art is what...   Dec 1 2011, 08:58 AM
- - Dragoncookie   muhahahaha 4 pages O:... er-hem. You think so? Ma...   Dec 1 2011, 09:03 AM
- - Eden   Well, it's not that it doesn't look good, ...   Dec 1 2011, 09:07 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Darken the outlines, eh? It'll be much easier ...   Dec 1 2011, 09:30 AM
- - Eden   Well, you could just mess with the contrast a litt...   Dec 1 2011, 10:08 AM
- - Dragoncookie   [Show/Hide] I messed around a bit!   Dec 1 2011, 10:32 AM
- - Eden   Oh, that looks much better! The ground seems m...   Dec 1 2011, 10:37 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Outlines would be amazingly hard. Like, really... ...   Dec 1 2011, 10:48 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Bump! Also, have a WIP (w/ outlines) (btw the ...   Dec 4 2011, 05:11 AM
- - Ciella   That's really cool Cookie! But, I think th...   Dec 5 2011, 08:16 AM
- - Saul95   Nice drawing :3 But has the wrong perspective: the...   Dec 5 2011, 12:05 PM
- - Guinevere   WAAAAHHH! BLINDINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!! ...   Dec 5 2011, 07:43 PM
- - Dragoncookie   @Ciel: You know me so well, but when it comes to t...   Dec 5 2011, 11:56 PM
- - Zackwell   You're seriously encouraging me to hand draw t...   Dec 6 2011, 10:08 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Ohohoh you shouldn't do that if you don't ...   Dec 6 2011, 10:12 AM
- - xmuffin   Story is really simple imo and that's all but ...   Dec 7 2011, 12:45 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Thanks! ^^ I hope to finish the demo really so...   Dec 7 2011, 12:03 PM
- - Dragoncookie   Bump.   Dec 8 2011, 11:43 PM
- - Zackwell   Ahaha. You don't need to bump this thread. It...   Dec 9 2011, 04:44 AM
- - Dragoncookie   It was halfway down the page so I freaked XD Yes....   Dec 9 2011, 06:08 AM
- - Zackwell   I'm sure you'll manage. Patience is a virt...   Dec 9 2011, 06:29 AM
- - Dragoncookie   5TH PAGE omnomnom ...err... yeah Yes, yes of cour...   Dec 9 2011, 06:49 AM
- - EvenAngels   QUOTE (Rydesk @ Dec 9 2011, 05:31 PM) QUO...   Dec 9 2011, 08:35 AM
- - Dragoncookie   @EvenAngels: You're actually being helpful xD ...   Dec 9 2011, 11:31 AM
- - Dragoncookie   quick "doodles" (i'll probably use i...   Dec 18 2011, 02:41 PM
- - Saul95   Why do not you show us complete drawings instead o...   Dec 20 2011, 12:54 PM
- - Dragoncookie   I would, but, it's really just the silhouettes...   Dec 20 2011, 03:34 PM
- - Guinevere   IDK if you should fill them in later. They'd ...   Dec 21 2011, 08:02 PM
- - Dragoncookie   Thanks! I'll make a filled in and a non fi...   Dec 22 2011, 01:10 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Bump!   Dec 26 2011, 01:08 PM
- - Guinevere   Well, unless you put up more information, I don...   Dec 27 2011, 09:26 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Well it'll take a lot of work no matter what x...   Dec 27 2011, 03:09 PM
- - Guinevere   Oh, a VX script in RMXP? They have different scri...   Dec 27 2011, 04:04 PM
|- - Eden   QUOTE (Guinevere @ Dec 27 2011, 04:04 PM)...   Dec 28 2011, 01:19 PM
|- - Guinevere   QUOTE (Eden @ Dec 28 2011, 01:19 PM) QUOT...   Dec 31 2011, 02:00 PM
- - Dragoncookie   Pfft, someone... I'll do it myself!! ....   Dec 28 2011, 03:39 PM
- - Dragoncookie   Well probably the input commands are a little diff...   Dec 31 2011, 06:53 PM
- - TTrain427   I like the artwork a lot, it always fun to see som...   Jan 7 2012, 09:10 AM
- - Dragoncookie   Thanks! ^^ Update: My computer is a bish and ...   Jan 8 2012, 11:43 PM
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