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My first attempt at art was a collaboration between myself and another team member, [S.O.U.L.]. We both sketched the portrait of this character and then I colored it. I found I enjoy coloring but here is my first art I've created on a computer. These are characters from a game we are making and the style is supposed to be somewhat cute or somewhat of the term chibi. If you are wondering why their heads and eyes are slightly bigger than a normal human's, this is the reason.
This design was approved by the project leader so what you are seeing is her final design here.
And here is another character, the main character, I drew in the same night with the help of [S.O.U.L.], but the project leader has told me to change some things so this is not the final design. And this one I finished quickly so I need to clean it up.
Here is the character sprite of this main character created by the leader of the project. FragmentRonan:
And I have created my Deviantart account:
http://ugaki.deviantart.com/ Please tell me what I can change or improve to make it better. Thank you.
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Ugaki Art by me. Oct 13 2011, 01:05 PM Nanashi Wow I don't know how much needs improving, bu... Oct 13 2011, 01:09 PM X-M-O Very nicely done, very shiny too. ^^
You've a ... Oct 13 2011, 01:42 PM Ugaki I thank you all for the feedback. FragmentRonan ju... Oct 13 2011, 05:16 PM X-M-O She looks great. =D
Maybe a little less "frow... Oct 13 2011, 05:34 PM Ugaki It is a male character and I think the spriter mad... Oct 13 2011, 05:41 PM X-M-O Well, I can't be certain that it is unusable, ... Oct 13 2011, 06:09 PM Ugaki Ah. Yes, Ibara has a somewhat feminine hair color ... Oct 13 2011, 06:14 PM X-M-O Ah ok, that makes sense then. ^^
Sounds like you g... Oct 13 2011, 06:17 PM Ember QUOTE (Ugaki @ Oct 14 2011, 07:35 AM)
... Oct 13 2011, 07:33 PM Ugaki To X-M-O, I only know one of the team members in r... Oct 13 2011, 07:37 PM Night5h4d3 I like these, more like a standard mangaka style t... Oct 13 2011, 08:29 PM Ugaki Thank you Night5h4d3. I'll try out all of your... Oct 13 2011, 08:39 PM Ugaki I started on the next main character, Suzu. Can yo... Oct 14 2011, 05:24 PM Night5h4d3 I really like this one, actually quite possibly th... Oct 14 2011, 05:36 PM Ugaki I'm using Photoshop CS5. I should try Paint to... Oct 14 2011, 05:42 PM Ember Again, it looks really great. The style is consist... Oct 14 2011, 06:02 PM supercow its mighty impressive it has good line and colour ... Oct 14 2011, 10:39 PM Ugaki Something different this time around, as we were e... Oct 14 2011, 10:42 PM X-M-O I'll go ahead and compliment you on your writi... Oct 14 2011, 11:00 PM Ugaki I'm only playing around with coloring.... Oct 15 2011, 04:11 AM supercow i cant say much but admire it, even more if ur jus... Oct 15 2011, 05:26 AM X-M-O It looks really good, you're doing well with t... Oct 15 2011, 08:42 AM Shadyone QUOTE (X-M-O @ Oct 16 2011, 03... Oct 15 2011, 12:29 PM X-M-O QUOTE (Shadyone @ Oct 15 2011, 03:29 PM) ... Oct 15 2011, 12:34 PM Ugaki Thank you for the excellent critique and tips. Thi... Oct 15 2011, 12:53 PM X-M-O Oh wow, it looks very nice. ^^
The shoulder/head ... Oct 15 2011, 01:42 PM Ugaki More color testing and trying for a more mature dr... Oct 15 2011, 03:31 PM Hirei If you wanted to draw more realistically,
Did a q... Oct 15 2011, 10:13 PM supercow QUOTE The head is a little too big for the body.
y... Oct 16 2011, 03:37 AM Ugaki Yes, this is just my style, sorry. Ahaha. Most man... Oct 16 2011, 12:01 PM Hirei Yeah I can understand about style, so sorry if I s... Oct 16 2011, 12:41 PM bacon Hi.
First off, you pick some really nice colors a... Oct 16 2011, 02:50 PM Nanashi Love the artwork and colouring you are doing! ... Oct 16 2011, 05:23 PM Ugaki I think I'll keep my "mistake style... Oct 16 2011, 06:49 PM X-M-O Very nice face/head structure there. ^^
I have to... Oct 16 2011, 10:01 PM supercow i dunno why but suddenly i remembered about einste... Oct 17 2011, 10:12 AM Ugaki Its a male. I don't design the characters, but... Oct 17 2011, 01:49 PM X-M-O I really like this last one! =D
Very nicely do... Oct 17 2011, 02:05 PM Ugaki I'm now using Paint Tool SAI. It has better pe... Oct 17 2011, 02:14 PM X-M-O Ah ok. =D
Hey, that sketch looks really good.
Nic... Oct 17 2011, 02:23 PM lato22 Your work is so beautiful! And your just start... Oct 17 2011, 05:43 PM Ugaki Thank you. Right as of now, I am working on how to... Oct 17 2011, 05:53 PM X-M-O She looks good. =]
I think you excel in colouring... Oct 17 2011, 11:49 PM Ugaki I'll be taking a small break from drawing in o... Oct 18 2011, 01:16 PM Ugaki My painting is improving! I know that I said I... Oct 19 2011, 09:00 PM X-M-O Excellent line art! I'm looking forward to... Oct 20 2011, 10:40 AM Ugaki I will make some paintings of just scenery soon. I... Oct 20 2011, 11:42 AM X-M-O As far as doing things new, you seem to do it well... Oct 20 2011, 11:46 AM Ugaki I started an art video journal on my YouTube chann... Oct 20 2011, 01:15 PM X-M-O Hey, that's a great idea. =D
Looks good, hope ... Oct 20 2011, 01:42 PM The Runaway Bro QUOTE The greats like Picasso do not have "ru... Oct 20 2011, 03:45 PM Ugaki A lot of his art still does not have accurate prop... Oct 20 2011, 03:52 PM The Runaway Bro QUOTE (Ugaki @ Oct 20 2011, 05:52 PM) A l... Oct 20 2011, 03:58 PM Geri the paintings are cool.
But they needs about 20% ... Oct 20 2011, 04:11 PM Donline I really like the look of your Character sketches,... Oct 20 2011, 04:15 PM Ugaki Firstly, I will ignore all more comments on my sty... Oct 22 2011, 09:22 PM supercow keep up the good work i have high hopes for u Oct 22 2011, 10:19 PM Ugaki Realism test. Realistic looking pupil/iris of eye.... Oct 22 2011, 11:25 PM X-M-O Wow, it's only been a day or so since I've... Oct 23 2011, 01:18 AM Ugaki Yes, well I work on many pieces at once and I work... Oct 23 2011, 01:29 AM X-M-O Well, you definitely have nice goals. =D
I'm h... Oct 23 2011, 01:46 AM Ugaki Thank you! I am looking through his Deviant Ar... Oct 23 2011, 02:18 AM X-M-O That makes sense, he uses a much better program be... Oct 23 2011, 02:10 PM Ugaki Updating a few pieces. Oct 24 2011, 09:38 PM X-M-O Nice work on the updates. =D
One thing I noticed ... Oct 25 2011, 12:17 AM Ugaki Yes I noticed too and it was a mistake in the way ... Oct 25 2011, 01:21 AM X-M-O Wow, I really like the way it turned out. =D
Very ... Oct 25 2011, 01:24 AM Ugaki Nothing new yet, but I posted a video on my You Tu... Oct 27 2011, 05:20 PM X-M-O It's cool to see the artwork being put togethe... Oct 27 2011, 08:17 PM Ugaki Yes, she's a character in the movie too. I... Oct 28 2011, 12:25 AM X-M-O Ah ok, so these are like the basic design and you... Oct 28 2011, 12:40 AM Ugaki Ah I may get someone to make my sprites for me or ... Oct 28 2011, 01:57 PM X-M-O Ah ok, I got what you're doing. ^^
Excellent, ... Oct 28 2011, 11:21 PM Ugaki These are rough sketches for a game I'm making... Oct 28 2011, 11:32 PM X-M-O They seem to be coming along nicely, though I... Oct 28 2011, 11:36 PM Ugaki Ahahahaha. I can't even think of anything to s... Oct 28 2011, 11:38 PM
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