QUOTE (Ryuga @ Aug 4 2011, 01:28 PM)
Alright, the signup addresses my concerns, but now it's hard to read. Might want to reconsider the spacing between paragraphs, and sections and whatnot.
Intro bleeds into the character sheet. Rules need to be seperate from the gym-leader section. Put a space between gym leader, elite four, team Ragnorok, etc, so it doesn't look like one continuous thing.
Alright just edited it again.