Bacon Art, Oh dear~ Options

[bacon]

Well, I critique people in art but I really can't do art either. x:
Someone suggested me to post some stuff so I will but please bear with me because it really isnt very good.

I am practicing doing some basic realism and proportion but let me tell you its super hard stuff x:

In terms of what I actually draw its mostly monsters concepts and scenes/murals. I mostly practice porportion stuff on paper but again its not really good so oh dear.

Please be super hard and informative with me i really want to improve like super bad in terms of proportion and perspective and stuff.

[Show/Hide] oh gosh terrible perosn

[Show/Hide] bomb head monster thing x:

[Show/Hide] flying head

[Show/Hide] long arm concept

I was working on this a bit but it isnt super good it was just some basic coloring this is actually the first coloring I have ever really done in my life x:
Ive never done shading either x:

[merrill]

The second one is completely adorable! So simple but so expressive at the same time. Something about the spherical head and the eyes reminds me of Earthbound or Mother 3. There are some stray lines and a few niggling anatomy issues mostly concerning the neck and arms, but for a quick sketch it's immensely charming and I would love to see more like it.

I'm loving the tree as well. It must have taken a while to do, the extreme complexity is almost mural-like. If you revisit it anytime soon all it would take is a little bit of detail shading to emphasize the vines, and maybe a stronger color like red or yellow on the flowers and star to really make them pop and contrast with the cooler blue coloration of the tree.