MrHawi Music For Rpg Maker games Options

[mrhawi]

Hi to all guys, i'm making music for a RPG maker project, and i want to show some of my work, i hope that you like it:

Battle Theme:Battle Theme

Boss Theme:Boss Theme

Town Theme: Town_Theme

Asd Theme: Asd Theme

Boss Theme 2:Boss Theme 2

Another Battle Theme=Poder, Fuerza, Justicia

MrHawi Boss Theme: MrHawi Boss Theme

Comments, critics or suggestions are welcome, thanks in advance, see ya! =)

[X-M-O]

- Battle Theme -
I really like this one, sounds familiar in some odd way, but I can't place my finger on it.
It's very good, has a memorable tune and doesn't come off as annoying. =]

- Boss Theme -
This one is all right, not memorable and not bad, but fits the description.

- Town Theme -
This one has great musical notes, but the instruments used (being MIDI) kind of mess it up for me.
If they were done with something other than the default instruments from a MIDI-creator-esque software, then I'd really like this one a lot more. =]

- Asd Theme -
Another great example of musical genius. I still think that using real instruments would be much better, but I can definitely tell that you have a knack for music; and possibly an ear for it as well.

- Boss Theme 2 -
This is much better than the first Boss Theme, the music flows better and is more intense whilst also having a good amount of complexity.
The overlying tune is creative and shows your ability to develop memorable audio. =]



Overall I think you definitely have the ability to develop good music and it may be attributed to your experience, though this appears to be attributed to the fact that you have an ear for music and know how to convert that into something that others can hear as well.

What software did you use to create these files?

I'd love to hear more examples of your music, you've attracted my attention with the above audio. =]

[mrhawi]

thanks for feedback, i appreciate your detailed comments, sorry for my late reply (i wasnt in my home), i will post more themes, and i use FL studio to make this midis, =).

[mrhawi]

Sorry for this double post, here is another theme:


Another Battle Theme=Poder, Fuerza, Justicia

thanks in advance =)

[X-M-O]

I really like Poder, Fuerza, Justicia but it sounds more like victory music than battle music to me. =]

[mrhawi]

Thanks for feedback, here is another music theme (this is for my game):

MrHawi Boss Theme

[Fat Panda]

Hey man, I listened to your battle theme, and it was really cool! I think the percussion could be a bit more complex, I heard a few parts that seemed a bit out of place, but it works well. You could also layer some harmonies in, maybe add some seventh chords or some triads. At 0:45 though, the trumpet seems a bit sour in the whole notes dominance, and doesnt seem to match the tonic melody the piano is giving. Besides that, I liked it, although it sounds more like a stage for a Mega Man X Game.

Good luck with your music, man! This is off to a great start.

[Shadyone]

I really like your music I would comment on each one but I'm busy with some stuff atm so I will probably be able to say some stuff about em tomorrow.

[Suke.]

Hey Hello guys,, i should say that i know Hawi and he is very talented guy.. i really like his songs and he have a lot of future as composer ...

Hello Hawi nice to see you here!!

[X-M-O]

Very well done, loved the last song even better after the first fifty-five seconds. =D

[Shadyone]

I agree with X-M-O about your battle theme, it does sound familiar but I can't think of what exactly, I really like it
The boss theme is pretty cool too
The town theme is a little.. meh, but it's quite nostalgic, so that'd give people more of a reason to like it.
Asd.. I like this one, it's pretty cool
Boss Theme 2: It's got that old retro theme to it, I like this one a lot (actually sorta reminds me of one of the songs in Distorted Travest)
MrHawi Boss Theme: It feels like an old Final Fantasy boss theme, this one I'm sure will be memorable
Poder,Lucha,Justicia: Very good, the first one is the best though

Conclusion: This is all very nice music and enjoyable to listen to over and over again and it is inspiring me to make more music for my other game (hopefully I can pull off some non-techno music). I can't wait to see your project when you release a demo


This post has been edited by Shadyone: Mar 17 2011, 12:46 AM

[mrhawi]

thanks for comments, i really aprecciate your suggestions, here is a new song:

Sedatio

bye =)

[X-M-O]

Sedatio is very clean, very pretty, but very short. Perhaps short and sweet would cover it, but I'd like to hear it go a little longer with a little more transition.
At any rate, very nice and I like it! =]

[mrhawi]

thanks for comments xmo, yeah its a bit short, i will try extend it, i want to show my new song:

Sad Theme

See ya! =)

[X-M-O]

Tema Triste (Sad Theme) is smooth, calm, and quite pleasant. The tune isn't too light and isn't too strong.
Very nicely done. =]

[mrhawi]

Thanks for feedback X-M-O, i really aprecciate comments, cricits or suggestions. Well im no good at composing sad theme and that was like my first sad theme =).

Well, i'm here now, to show another theme that i composed, this is a "remake" of a theme that i made some time ago, here is it:

Tema 5 V2

I hope that you like it, see ya! =)

[mrhawi]

here, another battle theme :

Encuentro Casual

[mrhawi]

New song! :

MrHawi en la misticidad: MrHawi en la Misticidad

[Holder]

Ah wow I love en la misticidad track and that battle them, the only critique is that they don't loop very well, do you have versions that flow from end to start?

Are you releasing any tracks for public use? What format are these in .ogg or .mp3?

[mrhawi]

yeah, i want to share my music, i have my songs in .midi and .mp3 format, thanks for the feedback =).

This post has been edited by mrhawi: Aug 21 2011, 04:11 PM