uhh,.....yeah the map really need to improve
very bland and masive without purpose.
upon entering castle i only find book shelf and nothing else...i find this very odd and yet intrigue to why that is
cuz some ppl just put random/lots of things inside a castle.
i get lost in the sense of direction cuz it didnt exactly tell me, i just walk around until i find the right direction.
the villager/npc looked like a walking zombie
need some activity or something...
i think u should change the background pict of shop/etc and not the original pict that came with it so it would look like ur playing someone elses game.
stoy....i dunno i dont follow it sorry
im not that good at following story, but it seems the flow of story is a bit rushed.
maybe use some program like (audio cleaning) to decrease audio size so its not massively large (140+mb)
if ur not using all audio/pict dont put them all up, might be a good time to organize
(i dunno about this but did u really use all that?)
was really looking forward to play a good game when i look at the title screen, but if ur new to it than i guess its fine for starter
btw who made the title screen? its not that bright (although it might need a bit for ambience) but i like it
most ppl just use photoshop to brighten it (too much even), title screen and bgm are the only positive i see.