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Nexus
Platform-RPG Maker VX
Story In this world of sword and magic, there is a three great nations. The Great Kingdom of Antaria, The FrostWood Empire and the Lands of the Orc's Tribe. Those three nations lived in peace and helped each other for some time, but nothing last forever. The relationship between Antaria and FrostWood became worse with a time, and in order to restore them, the antarian king Felix decided to let FrostWood's prince to marry antarian princess, the daughter of the king. But princess took this situation too serious because she didn't want to marry the prince. She commited suicide in order to run away from all this. After that FrostWood broke any relationship with Antaria. Without FrostWood's support Antaria became much weaker and it was attacked by orcs. This is where the story of the too much self-confident soldier begins. He founds himself in a strange laboratory after he loses his consciousness on the battlefield when the army of the Great Kingdom of Antaria fought against the legion of Orc's Tribe. Then the hero realize that his father dissapeared after the battle... This where he begins his quest to find out the truth about war with the orcs and the secret of his surviving. On his journey he meets new comrades and begins to understand that he can't do everything by himself and sometimes sacrifices are neccesary to do the right thing.
Characters
Protagonist Age: 22 Gender: Male Very self-confident. Doesn't like when someone orders him. He is a general Leonard's son.
Victoria Age: 21 Gender: Female She is commander of the Eagle Squad. Brave and dedicated woman who's lost her parents in war with the orcs.
Theim Age: 20 Gender: Female Very kind girl. She is a priestess. She joins the team in order to help people.
Edward Age: 25 Gender: Male He is a guardian of Victoria. He is not very smart but he is brave and he will do anything to save Victoria.
Leonard Age: 45 Gender: Male He is a general of Antarian army and protagonist's father. One of the most skillful warriors of all times. His son is all he's got now so he will do anything to protect him.
Notes This is actually my first english-languaged game, so do mind me if there are some spelling mistakes. I don't think that they are hurting the game much though.
This post has been edited by Udoter: Jul 23 2011, 08:01 AM
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Bout 30 mins into this, I must say I like the game so far tho its not enuff to impress me greatly as did Legionwood 2 :Tales of Two Swords, Lost Heaven, Prophecy the Demon Kingdom, The Cartographer, Fireheart: Legends of the Paladin, Tales of the Drunken Paladin and few others.
I am currently required by newly appointed General Mao to go to Sandbridge but I couldn't figure out how to climb a cliff in a forest due west of the city where you met General Mao and Victoria's younger brother(I forgot the city name sorry).Neyway, bypassing this for a moment, I like the scenes where I had to save Theim, and the campfire scene with Edward, Victoria and Theim, the dialogues are engaging. The intro of this game is epic. Player like me was immediately spurred into elements of surprise during the first walk as the Protaganist tried to escape the laboratory. A refreshing Attribute Upgrades System, a good Item Creating System, and a standard battle coreograph Sideview-Battle-System(you should learn from Prophecy the Demon Kingdom and Lost Heaven for better SBS battle coreography). You've done a great job on eventing especially on the map effects and fantabulous mapping skills(these are the only aspects of the game that rival excellently Legionwood 2 :Tales of Two Swords, Lost Heaven, Prophecy the Demon Kingdom, The Cartographer, Fireheart: Legends of the Paladin, Tales of the Drunken Paladin and few others.) I agree with 332211, you managed to make the personalities of the heroes to be well presented! Yeah!!! >:D
HOWEVAAA!!!!!
You fail at lore. There's not enuff for me to feel the fantasy RPG thrill. Orcs are nowadays common in fiction so you should have squeezed harder for effects. How are you going to feel to play an RPG where it's supposed to be fantasy-themed one, you walk into a fortress encamptment, find 5 soldiers and all 5 soldiers say "Greetings", you walk into a town, and some bunch of townsfolk all share "I hate those damn orcs". I mean seriously man, WTF? You walk into an Inn, Pub, omfg literally all NPC's in the town say "I hate those damn orcs. Kill the orcs! bla bla!"I'm not(at the moment) enjoying any lore in it. Flavour counts man, details decorate! And,.no sidequest?? Uhmm owwkay... o.0
Annnnnnnddddd,.how come both Protagonist and Edward share the SAME EXACT fighting skills? Ain't look and sound right to me,.. o.0
Nuff said. Good game~ ^^
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EDIT: Booyah! I shouldn't have reviewed cus I'm yet to finish the game! XD So,.my apologise,.. ~,~
This post has been edited by Fetz: Dec 3 2010, 07:47 AM
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QUOTE (Fetz @ Dec 3 2010, 08:01 AM)
Bout 30 mins into this, I must say I like the game so far tho its not enuff to impress me greatly as did Legionwood 2 :Tales of Two Swords, Lost Heaven, Prophecy the Demon Kingdom, The Cartographer, Fireheart: Legends of the Paladin, Tales of the Drunken Paladin and few others.
I am currently required by newly appointed General Mao to go to Sandbridge but I couldn't figure out how to climb a cliff in a forest due west of the city where you met General Mao and Victoria's younger brother(I forgot the city name sorry).Neyway, bypassing this for a moment, I like the scenes where I had to save Theim, and the campfire scene with Edward, Victoria and Theim, the dialogues are engaging. The intro of this game is epic. Player like me was immediately spurred into elements of surprise during the first walk as the Protaganist tried to escape the laboratory. A refreshing Attribute Upgrades System, a good Item Creating System, and a standard battle coreograph Sideview-Battle-System(you should learn from Prophecy the Demon Kingdom and Lost Heaven for better SBS battle coreography). You've done a great job on eventing especially on the map effects and fantabulous mapping skills(these are the only aspects of the game that rival excellently Legionwood 2 :Tales of Two Swords, Lost Heaven, Prophecy the Demon Kingdom, The Cartographer, Fireheart: Legends of the Paladin, Tales of the Drunken Paladin and few others.) I agree with 332211, you managed to make the personalities of the heroes to be well presented! Yeah!!! >:D
HOWEVAAA!!!!!
You fail at lore. There's not enuff for me to feel the fantasy RPG thrill. Orcs are nowadays common in fiction so you should have squeezed harder for effects. How are you going to feel to play an RPG where it's supposed to be fantasy-themed one, you walk into a fortress encamptment, find 5 soldiers and all 5 soldiers say "Greetings", you walk into a town, and some bunch of townsfolk all share "I hate those damn orcs". I mean seriously man, WTF? You walk into an Inn, Pub, omfg literally all NPC's in the town say "I hate those damn orcs. Kill the orcs! bla bla!"I'm not(at the moment) enjoying any lore in it. Flavour counts man, details decorate! And,.no sidequest?? Uhmm owwkay... o.0
Annnnnnnddddd,.how come both Protagonist and Edward share the SAME EXACT fighting skills? Ain't look and sound right to me,.. o.0
Nuff said. Good game~ ^^
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EDIT: Booyah! I shouldn't have reviewed cus I'm yet to finish the game! XD So,.my apologise,.. ~,~
Well yeah, NPC's really are using random dialogues, but that's just because I didn't want to create them at all, but then I thought that it would be stupid if there was no one living in the world, then I've got an idea how to do inhabite the world pretty fast. Sorry if you didn't like it. And about those games that you've mentioned, how many years ,do you think passed, since their demos was aviable? Persanaly, I think Lost heaven ,if it'll make it to the final release, is years away, and The Prophecy will never be made(I hope their developers will prove me wrong and no offence to anybody). I made this game in about 1 year, and it's really my first game, so sorry if there are some flaws, but nothing is perfect, and if you just don't like it you just can turn it off after all.
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Aug 21 2010, 07:22 AM
cool.
